From f4c1673124ec4490ca34180eadeb1edcc7b7fe92 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Luke Shumaker Date: Thu, 15 Nov 2012 00:48:55 -0500 Subject: Clean up text in various places. * It's "Arch Linux", not "Archlinux" or "ArchLinux" * Reword the description of what packages we have on the homepage * Add myself to the AUTHORS file * Fix the typo s/instalation/installation/ --- AUTHORS | 1 + templates/public/about.html | 10 +++++----- templates/public/index.html | 16 +++++++++------- 3 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-) diff --git a/AUTHORS b/AUTHORS index 279b6495..5ab816b3 100644 --- a/AUTHORS +++ b/AUTHORS @@ -11,3 +11,4 @@ Dusty Phillips # PARABOLAWEB AUTHORS Konstantinos Karantias Nicolás Reynolds +Luke Shumaker diff --git a/templates/public/about.html b/templates/public/about.html index 5ef4286b..402379d2 100644 --- a/templates/public/about.html +++ b/templates/public/about.html @@ -5,8 +5,8 @@

Parabola Presentation

Almost a year ago we started a project to offer the Free Software - community the chance of using an Archlinux system completely freed from - proprietary software.

+ community the chance of using an Arch Linux system completely + freed from proprietary software.

Today we have repositories and installable images of this wonderful GNU/Linux distribution from which we have eliminated the non-free software @@ -25,10 +25,10 @@

Why you should use Parabola

package, you can build your own operating system in the way you want and learn a lot along the way.

-

Free Archlinux

+

Free Arch Linux

Following the minimalist, KISS, spirit of Arch, we have managed to - achieve its freedom in a simple way. To free your Archlinux installation, + achieve its freedom in a simple way. To free your Arch Linux installation, just install our libre repositories list and update your system.

No reinstallation needed.

@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@

Participate

Boring tasks are always available. We want to start new projects. We want to help people have servers of their own, with services of their own, with - Parabola Social. We want people to remix their own Archlinux and share it + Parabola Social. We want people to remix their own Arch Linux and share it with the rest of the world.

We want Free Software with a social utility for a libre society.

diff --git a/templates/public/index.html b/templates/public/index.html index 971b5298..0d57e505 100644 --- a/templates/public/index.html +++ b/templates/public/index.html @@ -13,13 +13,15 @@

A libre version of Arch Linux

You've reached the website for Parabola GNU/Linux-libre, - a project aiming to provide a fully free as in freedom Archlinux, the - lightweight and flexible GNU/Linux distribution that tries to Keep It - Simple.

+ a project aiming to provide a fully free as in freedom Arch Linux, + the lightweight and flexible GNU/Linux distribution that tries to + Keep It Simple.

-

Currently we provide the official libre packages from Arch, plus our own - libre replacements when necessary, all of them optimized for the i686, - x86-64, and mips64el architectures.

+

Currently we provide the official packages from Arch that meet + the FSDG, + replacements for those that don't, and our own additions, all of + them optimized for the i686, x86-64, and mips64el + architectures.

You can find us on IRC at irc.freenode.net/#parabola.

@@ -115,7 +117,7 @@

Documentation

  • Official Installation Guide
  • Migration from Archlinux
    • + title="Free your Arch installation">Migration from Arch Linux

    Community

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