From ab507ce95d0de0f2d2ede5fd1bf7139de8765028 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Luke Shumaker <LukeShu@sbcglobal.net>
Date: Sun, 14 Jul 2013 19:52:24 -0600
Subject: update the description on the main page

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diff --git a/templates/public/index.html b/templates/public/index.html
index a5be4058..db14ee19 100644
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+++ b/templates/public/index.html
@@ -11,17 +11,20 @@
 {% block content_left %}
 {% cache 62 main-page-left secure %}
 <div id="intro" class="box">
-    <h2>A <em>libre</em> version of Arch Linux</h2>
-
-    <p>You've reached the website for <strong>{{BRANDING_DISTRONAME}}</strong>, a
-    project aiming to provide a fully free (as in freedom)
-    derivative of Arch Linux, the lightweight and flexible GNU/Linux
-    distribution that tries to Keep It Simple.</p>
-
-    <p>Currently we provide the official packages from Arch that meet
-    the <a href="http://www.gnu.org/distros/free-system-distribution-guidelines.html">FSDG</a>,
-    replacements for those that don't, and our own additions, all of
-    them optimized for the i686, x86-64, and mips64el architectures.</p>
+    <h2>A free, simple, lightweight distribution</h2>
+
+    <p>You've reached the website for <strong>{{BRANDING_DISTRONAME}}</strong>,
+    a project providing a fully free (as in <a title="Free Software Definition"
+        href="https://www.gnu.org/philosophy/free-sw">freedom</a>) derivative of
+    Arch Linux. Inheriting Arch's lightweight and flexibility,
+    {{BRANDING_SHORTNAME}} offers software freedom plus all power to the
+    users.</p>
+
+    <p>Currently we provide the packages from Arch that meet
+    the <a href="http://www.gnu.org/distros/free-system-distribution-guidelines.html">Free
+    System Distribution Guidelines</a> (FSDG), replacements for those that
+    don't, and our own additions, all of them optimized for the i686, x86-64,
+    and mips64el architectures.</p>
 
     <p>Our strong community is diverse and helpful. Please
     check out our <a href="irc://chat.freenode.net#parabola" title="IRC channel">IRC channel</a>
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