From 07a0ba4bf0168d8f8278cd55256eb694620ae127 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: André Fabian Silva Delgado <emulatorman@parabola.nu>
Date: Wed, 22 Jun 2016 14:06:58 -0300
Subject: add some modifications based on the Social Contract's consensus

---
 templates/public/about.html | 28 ++++++++++++++--------------
 templates/public/index.html |  8 +++-----
 2 files changed, 17 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-)

(limited to 'templates/public')

diff --git a/templates/public/about.html b/templates/public/about.html
index d380369d..35a4425d 100644
--- a/templates/public/about.html
+++ b/templates/public/about.html
@@ -7,30 +7,30 @@ <h2 class="title">Parabola Presentation</h2>
 
     <p>In 2009 we started a project to offer the Free Software
     community the chance of using an Arch system completely
-    freed from nonfree software.</p>
+    freed from non-Free software.</p>
 
     <p>Today we have repositories and installable images of this wonderful
-    GNU/Linux distribution from which we have eliminated the nonfree software
-    contained in its official repositories and which we have replaced with libre
+    GNU/Linux distribution from which we have eliminated the non-Free software
+    contained in its official repositories and which we have replaced with Free
     alternatives whenever we could.</p>
     
-    <p>The first example is Linux-libre, the kernel without blobs nor nonfree
-    firmware. Followed by GNU IceCat, the libre fork of Mozilla Firefox that
-    doesn't recommend nonfree addons, and that in our case neither recommends
+    <p>The first example is Linux-libre, the kernel without blobs nor non-Free
+    firmware. Followed by GNU IceCat, the Free fork of Mozilla Firefox that
+    doesn't recommend non-Free addons, and that in our case neither recommends
     services that spy on you like the Google search engine.</p>
 
-    <h3>Why you should use Parabola</h3>
+    <h3>Why you should use Parabola GNU/Linux-libre</h3>
 
     <p>Parabola equals software freedom plus all power to the users. GNU plus
     ArchWay. With a continuosly updated system, simple to manage, simple to
     package, you can build your own operating system in the way you want and
     learn a lot along the way.</p>
 
-    <h3>Free Arch</h3>
+    <h3>Free the GNU/Linux distribution of Arch</h3>
 
     <p>Following the minimalist, KISS, spirit of Arch, we have managed to
-    achieve its freedom in a simple way. To free your Arch installation,
-    just install our libre repositories list and update your system.</p>
+    achieve its freedom in a simple way. To Free your Arch installation,
+    just install our Free repositories list and update your system.</p>
     
     <p>No reinstallation needed.</p>
 
@@ -38,10 +38,10 @@ <h3>Participate</h3>
 
     <p>Boring tasks are always available. We want to start new projects. We want
     to help people have servers of their own, with services of their own, with
-    Parabola Social. We want people to remix their own Arch and share it
+    Parabola Social. We want people to remix their own Arch system and share it
     with the rest of the world.</p>
     
-    <p>We want Free Software with a social utility for a libre society.</p>
+    <p>We want Free Software with a social utility for a Free society.</p>
     
     <p>But we need your help. If all of us share a little of the boring work,
     we'll have more time to do the really fun stuff.</p>
@@ -49,8 +49,8 @@ <h3>Participate</h3>
     <p>Remaining tasks:</p>
       
     <ul>
-        <li>Audit repositories. If you find a nonfree package, or a package
-        with nonfree parts, report it as a bug.</li>
+        <li>Audit repositories. If you find a non-Free package, or a package
+        with non-Free parts, report it as a bug.</li>
 
         <li>Host repositories. Mirrors are not abundant.</li>
         
diff --git a/templates/public/index.html b/templates/public/index.html
index 80527cd7..08ada571 100644
--- a/templates/public/index.html
+++ b/templates/public/index.html
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ <h2>A fully free, simple, and lightweight operating system</h2>
 
     <p>You've reached the website of the Parabola&nbsp;GNU/Linux-libre operating
     system.  The Parabola project is a community driven effort to provide a
-    fully free (as in
+    fully Free (as in
     <a href="https://www.gnu.org/philosophy/free-sw">freedom</a>) operating
     system that is simple and lightweight.</p>
 
@@ -118,10 +118,8 @@ <h4>Documentation</h4>
             title="Installation guide">Installation Guide</a></li>
         <li><a href="{% wiki_url 'ARM_Installation_Guide' %}"
             title="ARM Installation guide">ARM Installation Guide</a></li>
-        <li><a href="{% wiki_url 'Migration' %}"
-            title="Free your Arch distro installation">Migration from Arch (the GNU/Linux distribution)</a></li>
-        <li><a href="{% wiki_url 'Migration_from_Arch_ARM' %}"
-            title="Free your Arch ARM distro installation">Migration from Arch ARM (the GNU/Linux distribution)</a></li>
+        <li><a href="{% wiki_url 'Migration_from_other_distributions' %}"
+            title="Free your distro installation">Migration from other distros</a></li>
     </ul>
 
     <h4>Community</h4>
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