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author | Jason St. John <jstjohn@purdue.edu> | 2013-12-10 00:10:03 -0500 |
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committer | Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl> | 2013-12-10 05:07:31 -0500 |
commit | 8c9552c6b417c8dc8d66019bc8e412c8d736454d (patch) | |
tree | fe13ab0fdbcc0f3a8ab4869bbd2dcb0eb38f7ea1 | |
parent | f7e2bd5a8070ba86cba6bcbf7d1c9a8173d846d4 (diff) |
man: improve wording and comma usage in systemd.journal-fields(7)
Improve wording under "Description" and "_KERNEL_DEVICE="
-rw-r--r-- | man/systemd.journal-fields.xml | 16 |
1 files changed, 8 insertions, 8 deletions
diff --git a/man/systemd.journal-fields.xml b/man/systemd.journal-fields.xml index 8a15598e63..bb89ed58d3 100644 --- a/man/systemd.journal-fields.xml +++ b/man/systemd.journal-fields.xml @@ -51,14 +51,14 @@ <title>Description</title> <para>Entries in the journal resemble an environment - block in their syntax, however with fields that can + block in their syntax but with fields that can include binary data. Primarily, fields are formatted UTF-8 text strings, and binary formatting is used only where formatting as UTF-8 text strings makes little sense. New fields may freely be defined by applications, but a few fields have special meaning. All fields with special meanings are - optional. In some cases fields may appear more than + optional. In some cases, fields may appear more than once per entry.</para> </refsect1> @@ -176,7 +176,7 @@ <term><varname>_UID=</varname></term> <term><varname>_GID=</varname></term> <listitem> - <para>The process, user and + <para>The process, user, and group ID of the process the journal entry originates from formatted as a decimal @@ -190,7 +190,7 @@ <term><varname>_CMDLINE=</varname></term> <listitem> <para>The name, the executable - path and the command line of + path, and the command line of the process the journal entry originates from.</para> </listitem> @@ -389,12 +389,12 @@ the major and minor of the device node, separated by <literal>:</literal> and prefixed by <literal>b</literal>. Similar - for character devices, but + for character devices but prefixed by <literal>c</literal>. For network - devices the interface index, + devices, this is the interface index prefixed by <literal>n</literal>. For all other - devices <literal>+</literal> followed by the - subsystem name, followed by + devices, this is the subsystem name + prefixed by <literal>+</literal>, followed by <literal>:</literal>, followed by the kernel device name.</para> </listitem> |