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| author | Jan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de> | 2014-02-17 02:49:45 +0100 |
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| committer | Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl> | 2014-02-17 19:03:07 -0500 |
| commit | dc968941bfc9be464e1df15afa05693dec3ec192 (patch) | |
| tree | 4a6390afb279dd0406e2f8d68843b6a918f9cc14 | |
| parent | 66f756d437658cc464bfb5647c97efd0cf77f933 (diff) | |
doc: choose different words to improve clarity
I suggest the following changes to improve the way the text reads
("flows").
| -rw-r--r-- | man/crypttab.xml | 6 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | man/sd_bus_creds_get_pid.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | man/sd_bus_message_get_monotonic_usec.xml | 2 |
3 files changed, 5 insertions, 5 deletions
diff --git a/man/crypttab.xml b/man/crypttab.xml index 2d4150013b..668e51dc06 100644 --- a/man/crypttab.xml +++ b/man/crypttab.xml @@ -171,7 +171,7 @@ If the key slot does not match the given passphrase or key, but another would, the setup of the device will fail regardless. - This implies <varname>luks</varname>. See + This option implies <varname>luks</varname>. See <citerefentry><refentrytitle>cryptsetup</refentrytitle><manvolnum>8</manvolnum></citerefentry> for possible values. The default is to try all key slots in sequential order.</para></listitem> @@ -275,7 +275,7 @@ <term><varname>tcrypt-hidden</varname></term> <listitem><para>Use the hidden TrueCrypt volume. - This implies <varname>tcrypt</varname>.</para> + This option implies <varname>tcrypt</varname>.</para> <para>This will map the hidden volume that is inside of the volume provided in the second @@ -304,7 +304,7 @@ <term><varname>tcrypt-system</varname></term> <listitem><para>Use TrueCrypt in system - encryption mode. This implies + encryption mode. This option implies <varname>tcrypt</varname>.</para></listitem> </varlistentry> diff --git a/man/sd_bus_creds_get_pid.xml b/man/sd_bus_creds_get_pid.xml index 25978a2895..a35efef0ca 100644 --- a/man/sd_bus_creds_get_pid.xml +++ b/man/sd_bus_creds_get_pid.xml @@ -252,7 +252,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>. numeric GID (group identifier).</para> <para><function>sd_bus_creds_get_comm</function> will retrieve the - comm field (name of the executable, as stored in + comm field (truncated name of the executable, as stored in <filename>/proc/<replaceable>pid</replaceable>/comm</filename>). </para> diff --git a/man/sd_bus_message_get_monotonic_usec.xml b/man/sd_bus_message_get_monotonic_usec.xml index 57b115c63a..b9437ff62e 100644 --- a/man/sd_bus_message_get_monotonic_usec.xml +++ b/man/sd_bus_message_get_monotonic_usec.xml @@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ <para>These timestamps and the sequence number are attached to each message by the kernel and cannot be - manipulated by the sending userspace.</para> + manipulated by the sender.</para> <para>Note that these timestamps are only available on some bus transports, and only after support for them |