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author | Jan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de> | 2013-12-26 02:47:45 +0100 |
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committer | Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl> | 2013-12-25 22:53:46 -0500 |
commit | e0e009c067aa7237f9683c46e5845bbb11ec67c2 (patch) | |
tree | d2c31f3f444bfa569569ac195e2778c475a67c26 | |
parent | b040723ea412209e0edf54647fa5aa4287411507 (diff) |
man: grammar and wording improvements
This is a recurring submission and includes corrections to:
- missing words, preposition choice.
- change of /lib to /usr/lib, because that is what most distros are
using as the system-wide location for systemd/udev files.
-rw-r--r-- | man/daemon.xml | 2 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | man/journalctl.xml | 4 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | man/sd_bus_message_get_cookie.xml | 6 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | man/sd_bus_request_name.xml | 20 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | man/sd_is_fifo.xml | 2 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | man/systemctl.xml | 8 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | man/systemd-networkd.service.xml | 8 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | man/systemd.device.xml | 2 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | man/systemd.exec.xml | 4 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | man/systemd.service.xml | 2 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | man/systemd.timer.xml | 10 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | man/systemd.unit.xml | 2 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | man/udev.xml | 12 |
13 files changed, 41 insertions, 41 deletions
diff --git a/man/daemon.xml b/man/daemon.xml index 7790420c6e..1fe4546f00 100644 --- a/man/daemon.xml +++ b/man/daemon.xml @@ -408,7 +408,7 @@ description files.</para> <para>In systemd, if the developer or - administrator wants to make sure a service or + administrator wants to make sure that a service or other unit is activated automatically on boot, it is recommended to place a symlink to the unit file in the <filename>.wants/</filename> diff --git a/man/journalctl.xml b/man/journalctl.xml index 6a972109c5..55474c53d9 100644 --- a/man/journalctl.xml +++ b/man/journalctl.xml @@ -119,7 +119,7 @@ <para>When outputing to a tty, lines are colored according to priority: lines of level ERROR and higher are colored red; lines of level NOTICE and higher are - highlighted; and other lines are displayed normally. + highlighted; other lines are displayed normally. </para> </refsect1> @@ -232,7 +232,7 @@ <term><option>-r</option></term> <term><option>--reverse</option></term> - <listitem><para>Reverse output so the newest + <listitem><para>Reverse output so that the newest entries are displayed first.</para></listitem> </varlistentry> diff --git a/man/sd_bus_message_get_cookie.xml b/man/sd_bus_message_get_cookie.xml index 0e3c4ba723..bf403a222f 100644 --- a/man/sd_bus_message_get_cookie.xml +++ b/man/sd_bus_message_get_cookie.xml @@ -85,7 +85,7 @@ field.</para> <para>Both functions take a message object as first - parameter and a place to store the 64bit cookie + parameter and a place to store the 64-bit cookie in.</para> </refsect1> @@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ errno-style error code.</para> <para>On success, the cookie/reply cookie is returned - in the specified 64bit unsigned integer variable.</para> + in the specified 64-bit unsigned integer variable.</para> </refsect1> <refsect1> @@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ been sent yet and hence has no cookie assigned, or that the message is not a method response message and hence - carries to reply cookie + carries a reply cookie field.</para></listitem> </varlistentry> </variablelist> diff --git a/man/sd_bus_request_name.xml b/man/sd_bus_request_name.xml index c84b0b62fa..7393fdd90e 100644 --- a/man/sd_bus_request_name.xml +++ b/man/sd_bus_request_name.xml @@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ <term><varname>SD_BUS_NAME_ALLOW_REPLACEMENT</varname></term> <listitem><para>After acquiring the - name successuflly, permit other peers + name successfully, permit other peers to take over the name when they try to acquire it with the <varname>SD_BUS_NAME_REPLACE_EXISTING</varname> @@ -95,10 +95,10 @@ <varlistentry> <term><varname>SD_BUS_NAME_REPLACE_EXISTING</varname></term> - <listitem><para>Take over a the name - if it is already acquired by a another - peer, and that other peer permitted - taking it over by setting + <listitem><para>Take over the name + if it is already acquired by another + peer, and that other peer has permitted + takeover by setting <varname>SD_BUS_NAME_ALLOW_REPLACEMENT</varname> while acquiring it.</para></listitem> </varlistentry> @@ -106,8 +106,8 @@ <varlistentry> <term><varname>SD_BUS_NAME_QUEUE</varname></term> - <listitem><para>Queue name - acquisition when the name is already + <listitem><para>Queue the acquisition + of the name when the name is already taken.</para></listitem> </varlistentry> </variablelist> @@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ <varlistentry> <term><varname>-ESRCH</varname></term> - <listitem><para>It was attemted to + <listitem><para>It was attempted to release a name that is currently not registered on the bus.</para></listitem> @@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ <varlistentry> <term><varname>-EADDRINUSE</varname></term> - <listitem><para>It was attemted to + <listitem><para>It was attempted to release a name that is owned by a different peer on the bus.</para></listitem> @@ -199,7 +199,7 @@ <listitem><para>The bus connection has been created in a different process - than the current.</para></listitem> + than the current one.</para></listitem> </varlistentry> </variablelist> </refsect1> diff --git a/man/sd_is_fifo.xml b/man/sd_is_fifo.xml index 4bb2236fce..58cd1c91bb 100644 --- a/man/sd_is_fifo.xml +++ b/man/sd_is_fifo.xml @@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ called to check whether the specified file descriptor refers to a special file. If the <parameter>path</parameter> parameter is not - <constant>NULL</constant>, it is checked whether file + <constant>NULL</constant>, it is checked whether the file descriptor is bound to the specified file name. Special files in this context are character device nodes and files in <filename>/proc</filename> diff --git a/man/systemctl.xml b/man/systemctl.xml index 7c9ffc81a3..250866a875 100644 --- a/man/systemctl.xml +++ b/man/systemctl.xml @@ -194,8 +194,8 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>. <term><option>--job-mode=</option></term> <listitem> - <para>When queuing a new job, control how to deal with already - queued jobs. Takes one of <literal>fail</literal>, + <para>When queuing a new job, this option controls how to deal with + already queued jobs. It takes one of <literal>fail</literal>, <literal>replace</literal>, <literal>replace-irreversibly</literal>, <literal>isolate</literal>, @@ -543,7 +543,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>. <term><command>list-sockets <optional><replaceable>PATTERN</replaceable>...</optional></command></term> <listitem> - <para>List socket units ordered by the listening address. + <para>List socket units ordered by listening address. If one or more <replaceable>PATTERN</replaceable>s are specified, only socket units matching one of them are shown. Produces output similar to @@ -692,7 +692,7 @@ kobject-uevent 1 systemd-udevd-kernel.socket systemd-udevd.service <listitem> <para>Check whether any of the specified units are active (i.e. running). Returns an exit code 0 if at least one is - active, non-zero otherwise. Unless <option>--quiet</option> + active, or non-zero otherwise. Unless <option>--quiet</option> is specified, this will also print the current unit state to STDOUT.</para> </listitem> diff --git a/man/systemd-networkd.service.xml b/man/systemd-networkd.service.xml index 6c65fbaefe..908354c587 100644 --- a/man/systemd-networkd.service.xml +++ b/man/systemd-networkd.service.xml @@ -64,8 +64,8 @@ <para>Network configurations applied before networkd is started are not removed, and configuration applied by networkd are not removed when networkd exits. This ensures restarting networkd - does not cut the network connection, and in particular that it - is safe to transition between the initrd and the real root, + does not cut the network connection, and, in particular, that + it is safe to transition between the initrd and the real root, and back.</para> </refsect1> @@ -80,10 +80,10 @@ identical filenames replace each other. Files in <filename>/etc</filename> have the highest priority, files in <filename>/run</filename> take precedence over files with the same - name in <filename>/lib</filename>. This can be used to override a + name in <filename>/usr/lib</filename>. This can be used to override a system-supplied configuration file with a local file if needed; a symlink in <filename>/etc</filename> with the same name as a configuration file in - <filename>/lib</filename>, pointing to <filename>/dev/null</filename>, + <filename>/usr/lib</filename>, pointing to <filename>/dev/null</filename>, disables the configuration file entirely.</para> <refsect2><title>Virtual Network Devices</title> diff --git a/man/systemd.device.xml b/man/systemd.device.xml index fa7074aaf1..619fe19680 100644 --- a/man/systemd.device.xml +++ b/man/systemd.device.xml @@ -149,7 +149,7 @@ even if it shows up in the udev tree. If this property is unset or set to 1, the device will be considered - plugged if it visible in the + plugged if it is visible in the udev tree. This property has no influence on the behavior when a device disappears from the udev diff --git a/man/systemd.exec.xml b/man/systemd.exec.xml index 2778497647..17748d4066 100644 --- a/man/systemd.exec.xml +++ b/man/systemd.exec.xml @@ -847,7 +847,7 @@ processes and mounts private <filename>/tmp</filename> and <filename>/var/tmp</filename> - directories inside it that are not + directories inside it that is not shared by processes outside of the namespace. This is useful to secure access to temporary files of the @@ -857,7 +857,7 @@ <filename>/var/tmp</filename> impossible. All temporary data created by service will be removed after - service is stopped. Defaults to + the service is stopped. Defaults to false. Note that it is possible to run two or more units within the same private <filename>/tmp</filename> and diff --git a/man/systemd.service.xml b/man/systemd.service.xml index 8e6c20550d..5afeffa23e 100644 --- a/man/systemd.service.xml +++ b/man/systemd.service.xml @@ -427,7 +427,7 @@ <programlisting>ExecStart=/bin/sh -c 'dmesg | tac' </programlisting> - <para>Only select environment variables + <para>Only select environment variables that are set for executed commands. See <citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd.exec</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>. </para> diff --git a/man/systemd.timer.xml b/man/systemd.timer.xml index 7143f9f931..bb3a6d1386 100644 --- a/man/systemd.timer.xml +++ b/man/systemd.timer.xml @@ -165,8 +165,8 @@ assignments will have no effect.</para> - <para>Note that timers are not - necessarily expired at the precise + <para>Note that timers do not + necessarily expire at the precise time configured with these settings, as they are subject to the <varname>AccuracySec=</varname> @@ -187,8 +187,8 @@ <varname>OnActiveSec=</varname> and related settings.</para> - <para>Note that timers are not - necessarily expired at the precise + <para>Note that timers do not + necessarily expire at the precise time configured with this setting, as it is subject to the <varname>AccuracySec=</varname> @@ -201,7 +201,7 @@ <listitem><para>Specify the accuracy the timer shall elapse with. Defaults to 1min. The timer is scheduled to - expire within a time window starting + elapse within a time window starting with the time specified in <varname>OnCalendar=</varname>, <varname>OnActiveSec=</varname>, diff --git a/man/systemd.unit.xml b/man/systemd.unit.xml index 0244570361..487827cdde 100644 --- a/man/systemd.unit.xml +++ b/man/systemd.unit.xml @@ -548,7 +548,7 @@ of units. When systemd stops or restarts the units listed here, the action is propagated to this unit. - Note that this is a one way dependency — + Note that this is a one-way dependency — changes to this unit do not affect the listed units. </para></listitem> diff --git a/man/udev.xml b/man/udev.xml index bd071e1770..32a520e7b8 100644 --- a/man/udev.xml +++ b/man/udev.xml @@ -63,10 +63,10 @@ regardless of the directories in which they live. However, files with identical filenames replace each other. Files in <filename>/etc</filename> have the highest priority, files in <filename>/run</filename> take precedence - over files with the same name in <filename>/lib</filename>. This can be + over files with the same name in <filename>/usr/lib</filename>. This can be used to override a system-supplied rules file with a local file if needed; a symlink in <filename>/etc</filename> with the same name as a rules file in - <filename>/lib</filename>, pointing to <filename>/dev/null</filename>, + <filename>/usr/lib</filename>, pointing to <filename>/dev/null</filename>, disables the rules file entirely. Rule files must have the extension <filename>.rules</filename>; other extensions are ignored.</para> @@ -715,10 +715,10 @@ regardless of the directories in which they live. However, files with identical filenames replace each other. Files in <filename>/etc</filename> have the highest priority, files in <filename>/run</filename> take precedence - over files with the same name in <filename>/lib</filename>. This can be + over files with the same name in <filename>/usr/lib</filename>. This can be used to override a system-supplied hwdb file with a local file if needed; a symlink in <filename>/etc</filename> with the same name as a hwdb file in - <filename>/lib</filename>, pointing to <filename>/dev/null</filename>, + <filename>/usr/lib</filename>, pointing to <filename>/dev/null</filename>, disables the hwdb file entirely. hwdb files must have the extension <filename>.hwdb</filename>; other extensions are ignored.</para> @@ -754,10 +754,10 @@ regardless of the directories in which they live. However, files with identical filenames replace each other. Files in <filename>/etc</filename> have the highest priority, files in <filename>/run</filename> take precedence - over files with the same name in <filename>/lib</filename>. This can be + over files with the same name in <filename>/usr/lib</filename>. This can be used to override a system-supplied link file with a local file if needed; a symlink in <filename>/etc</filename> with the same name as a link file in - <filename>/lib</filename>, pointing to <filename>/dev/null</filename>, + <filename>/usr/lib</filename>, pointing to <filename>/dev/null</filename>, disables the link file entirely.</para> <para>The link file contains a <literal>[Match]</literal> section, which |