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authorJan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de>2013-07-02 05:44:04 +0200
committerZbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl>2013-07-03 08:19:20 -0400
commit409dee2e44e7dc73d6bf00d782938e4cb4105f5b (patch)
treed7b1b56af3366bb15f2743cc767a0c51a966e5fa /man/crypttab.xml
parent337fa161c40f26cb7c33847d666556d28905b6a9 (diff)
man: more grammar improvements
- place commas - expand contractions (this is written prose :) - add some missing words
Diffstat (limited to 'man/crypttab.xml')
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1 files changed, 5 insertions, 5 deletions
diff --git a/man/crypttab.xml b/man/crypttab.xml
index 1063b46e06..e52b7e6015 100644
--- a/man/crypttab.xml
+++ b/man/crypttab.xml
@@ -83,15 +83,15 @@
underlying block device, or a specification of a block
device via <literal>UUID=</literal> followed by the
UUID. If the block device contains a LUKS signature,
- it is opened as a LUKS encrypted partition; otherwise
+ it is opened as a LUKS encrypted partition; otherwise,
it is assumed to be a raw dm-crypt partition.</para>
<para>The third field specifies the encryption
password. If the field is not present or the password
is set to none, the password has to be manually
- entered during system boot. Otherwise the field is
+ entered during system boot. Otherwise, the field is
interpreted as a path to a file containing the
- encryption password. For swap encryption
+ encryption password. For swap encryption,
<filename>/dev/urandom</filename> or the hardware
device <filename>/dev/hw_random</filename> can be used
as the password file; using
@@ -239,7 +239,7 @@
<listitem><para>The system will not
wait for the device to show up and be
unlocked at boot, and not fail the
- boot if it doesn't show
+ boot if it does not show
up.</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>
@@ -282,7 +282,7 @@
</variablelist>
<para>At early boot and when the system manager
- configuration is reloaded this file is translated into
+ configuration is reloaded, this file is translated into
native systemd units
by <citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd-cryptsetup-generator</refentrytitle><manvolnum>8</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para>
</refsect1>