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author | Jan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de> | 2013-07-02 05:44:04 +0200 |
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committer | Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl> | 2013-07-03 08:19:20 -0400 |
commit | 409dee2e44e7dc73d6bf00d782938e4cb4105f5b (patch) | |
tree | d7b1b56af3366bb15f2743cc767a0c51a966e5fa /man/machine-id.xml | |
parent | 337fa161c40f26cb7c33847d666556d28905b6a9 (diff) |
man: more grammar improvements
- place commas
- expand contractions (this is written prose :)
- add some missing words
Diffstat (limited to 'man/machine-id.xml')
-rw-r--r-- | man/machine-id.xml | 6 |
1 files changed, 3 insertions, 3 deletions
diff --git a/man/machine-id.xml b/man/machine-id.xml index d7a56cb548..b037e47c01 100644 --- a/man/machine-id.xml +++ b/man/machine-id.xml @@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ <para>The machine ID is usually generated from a random source during system installation and stays constant for all subsequent boots. Optionally, for - stateless systems it is generated during runtime at + stateless systems, it is generated during runtime at boot if it is found to be empty.</para> <para>The machine ID does not change based on user @@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ id[8] = (id[8] & 0x3F) | 0x80;</programlisting> <para>(This code is inspired by <literal>generate_random_uuid()</literal> of <filename>drivers/char/random.c</filename> from the - kernel sources.)</para> + Linux kernel sources.)</para> </refsect1> @@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ id[8] = (id[8] & 0x3F) | 0x80;</programlisting> <para>The simple configuration file format of <filename>/etc/machine-id</filename> originates in the <filename>/var/lib/dbus/machine-id</filename> file - introduced by D-Bus. In fact this latter file might be a + introduced by D-Bus. In fact, this latter file might be a symlink to <varname>/etc/machine-id</varname>.</para> </refsect1> |