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authorJason St. John <jstjohn@purdue.edu>2013-06-27 21:51:44 +0200
committerZbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl>2013-07-02 23:06:22 -0400
commite9dd9f9547350c7dc0473583b5c2228dc8f0ab76 (patch)
tree8c40d1a1e527a09974839ac44a3b7b3d19232758 /man/pam_systemd.xml
parent6824690f140f45064157d220a24b9afbeb1d093f (diff)
man: improve grammar and word formatting in numerous man pages
Use proper grammar, word usage, adjective hyphenation, commas, capitalization, spelling, etc. To improve readability, some run-on sentences or sentence fragments were revised. [zj: remove the space from 'file name', 'host name', and 'time zone'.]
Diffstat (limited to 'man/pam_systemd.xml')
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1 files changed, 17 insertions, 17 deletions
diff --git a/man/pam_systemd.xml b/man/pam_systemd.xml
index 0354811976..4e5cdf248b 100644
--- a/man/pam_systemd.xml
+++ b/man/pam_systemd.xml
@@ -131,13 +131,13 @@
<varlistentry>
<term><option>kill-only-users=</option></term>
- <listitem><para>Takes a comma
- separated list of user names or
- numeric user ids as argument. If this
- option is used the effect of the
+ <listitem><para>Takes a comma-separated
+ list of usernames or
+ numeric user IDs as argument. If this
+ option is used, the effect of the
<option>kill-session-processes=</option> options
will apply only to the listed
- users. If this option is not used the
+ users. If this option is not used, the
option applies to all local
users. Note that
<option>kill-exclude-users=</option>
@@ -149,13 +149,13 @@
<varlistentry>
<term><option>kill-exclude-users=</option></term>
- <listitem><para>Takes a comma
- separated list of user names or
- numeric user ids as argument. Users
+ <listitem><para>Takes a comma-separated
+ list of usernames or
+ numeric user IDs as argument. Users
listed in this argument will not be
subject to the effect of
- <option>kill-session-processes=</option>. Note
- that this option takes precedence
+ <option>kill-session-processes=</option>.
+ Note that this option takes precedence
over
<option>kill-only-users=</option>, and
hence whatever is listed for
@@ -169,8 +169,8 @@
<varlistentry>
<term><option>controllers=</option></term>
- <listitem><para>Takes a comma
- separated list of control group
+ <listitem><para>Takes a comma-separated
+ list of control group
controllers in which hierarchies a
user/session control group will be
created by default for each user
@@ -183,8 +183,8 @@
<varlistentry>
<term><option>reset-controllers=</option></term>
- <listitem><para>Takes a comma
- separated list of control group
+ <listitem><para>Takes a comma-separated
+ list of control group
controllers in which hierarchies the
logged in processes will be reset to
the root control
@@ -222,7 +222,7 @@
configured system-wide in
<citerefentry><refentrytitle>logind.conf</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>. The
former kills processes of a session as soon as it
- ends, the latter kills processes as soon as the last
+ ends; the latter kills processes as soon as the last
session of the user ends.</para>
<para>If the options are omitted they default to
@@ -250,7 +250,7 @@
<term><varname>$XDG_SESSION_ID</varname></term>
<listitem><para>A session identifier,
- suitable to be used in file names. The
+ suitable to be used in filenames. The
string itself should be considered
opaque, although often it is just the
audit session ID as reported by
@@ -281,7 +281,7 @@
applications should not rely on this
behavior and must be able to deal with
stale files. To store session-private
- data in this directory the user should
+ data in this directory, the user should
include the value of <varname>$XDG_SESSION_ID</varname>
in the filename. This directory shall
be used for runtime file system