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| author | Jason St. John <jstjohn@purdue.edu> | 2013-06-27 21:51:44 +0200 |
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| committer | Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl> | 2013-07-02 23:06:22 -0400 |
| commit | e9dd9f9547350c7dc0473583b5c2228dc8f0ab76 (patch) | |
| tree | 8c40d1a1e527a09974839ac44a3b7b3d19232758 /man/pam_systemd.xml | |
| parent | 6824690f140f45064157d220a24b9afbeb1d093f (diff) | |
man: improve grammar and word formatting in numerous man pages
Use proper grammar, word usage, adjective hyphenation, commas,
capitalization, spelling, etc.
To improve readability, some run-on sentences or sentence fragments were
revised.
[zj: remove the space from 'file name', 'host name', and 'time zone'.]
Diffstat (limited to 'man/pam_systemd.xml')
| -rw-r--r-- | man/pam_systemd.xml | 34 |
1 files changed, 17 insertions, 17 deletions
diff --git a/man/pam_systemd.xml b/man/pam_systemd.xml index 0354811976..4e5cdf248b 100644 --- a/man/pam_systemd.xml +++ b/man/pam_systemd.xml @@ -131,13 +131,13 @@ <varlistentry> <term><option>kill-only-users=</option></term> - <listitem><para>Takes a comma - separated list of user names or - numeric user ids as argument. If this - option is used the effect of the + <listitem><para>Takes a comma-separated + list of usernames or + numeric user IDs as argument. If this + option is used, the effect of the <option>kill-session-processes=</option> options will apply only to the listed - users. If this option is not used the + users. If this option is not used, the option applies to all local users. Note that <option>kill-exclude-users=</option> @@ -149,13 +149,13 @@ <varlistentry> <term><option>kill-exclude-users=</option></term> - <listitem><para>Takes a comma - separated list of user names or - numeric user ids as argument. Users + <listitem><para>Takes a comma-separated + list of usernames or + numeric user IDs as argument. Users listed in this argument will not be subject to the effect of - <option>kill-session-processes=</option>. Note - that this option takes precedence + <option>kill-session-processes=</option>. + Note that this option takes precedence over <option>kill-only-users=</option>, and hence whatever is listed for @@ -169,8 +169,8 @@ <varlistentry> <term><option>controllers=</option></term> - <listitem><para>Takes a comma - separated list of control group + <listitem><para>Takes a comma-separated + list of control group controllers in which hierarchies a user/session control group will be created by default for each user @@ -183,8 +183,8 @@ <varlistentry> <term><option>reset-controllers=</option></term> - <listitem><para>Takes a comma - separated list of control group + <listitem><para>Takes a comma-separated + list of control group controllers in which hierarchies the logged in processes will be reset to the root control @@ -222,7 +222,7 @@ configured system-wide in <citerefentry><refentrytitle>logind.conf</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>. The former kills processes of a session as soon as it - ends, the latter kills processes as soon as the last + ends; the latter kills processes as soon as the last session of the user ends.</para> <para>If the options are omitted they default to @@ -250,7 +250,7 @@ <term><varname>$XDG_SESSION_ID</varname></term> <listitem><para>A session identifier, - suitable to be used in file names. The + suitable to be used in filenames. The string itself should be considered opaque, although often it is just the audit session ID as reported by @@ -281,7 +281,7 @@ applications should not rely on this behavior and must be able to deal with stale files. To store session-private - data in this directory the user should + data in this directory, the user should include the value of <varname>$XDG_SESSION_ID</varname> in the filename. This directory shall be used for runtime file system |