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author | Jan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de> | 2014-05-08 01:28:45 +0200 |
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committer | Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl> | 2014-05-07 20:13:27 -0400 |
commit | b8bde11658366290521e3d03316378b482600323 (patch) | |
tree | ccecde357ccb3b109e69aa2a6227f7cd7c71aedc /man/sd_bus_path_encode.xml | |
parent | dca348bcbb462305864526c587495a14a76bfcde (diff) |
doc: comma placement corrections and word order
Set commas where there should be some.
Some improvements to word order.
Diffstat (limited to 'man/sd_bus_path_encode.xml')
-rw-r--r-- | man/sd_bus_path_encode.xml | 18 |
1 files changed, 9 insertions, 9 deletions
diff --git a/man/sd_bus_path_encode.xml b/man/sd_bus_path_encode.xml index 7e11906872..5849127bed 100644 --- a/man/sd_bus_path_encode.xml +++ b/man/sd_bus_path_encode.xml @@ -82,16 +82,16 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>. prefix and an external identifier string as arguments, plus a place to store the returned bus path string. The bus path prefix must be a valid bus path, starting with a slash - <literal>/</literal>, but not ending in one. The external - identifier string may be in any format, may be the empty string - and no restrictions on the charset are made - however it must + <literal>/</literal>, and not ending in one. The external + identifier string may be in any format, may be the empty string, + and has no restrictions on the charset — however, it must always be <constant>NUL</constant>-terminated. The returned string will be the concatenation of the bus path prefix plus an escaped version of the external identifier string. This operation may be reversed with <function>sd_bus_decode()</function>. It is - recommended to only use external identifiers here that generally + recommended to only use external identifiers that generally require little escaping to be turned into valid bus path - identifiers (for example by sticking to a 7-bit ASCII character + identifiers (for example, by sticking to a 7-bit ASCII character set), in order to ensure the resulting bus path is still short and easily processed.</para> @@ -101,12 +101,12 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>. takes a bus path and a prefix string, plus a place to store the returned external identifier string. If the bus path does not start with the specified prefix, 0 is returned and the returned - string is set to <constant>NULL</constant>. Otherwise the + string is set to <constant>NULL</constant>. Otherwise, the string following the prefix is unescaped and returned in the external identifier string.</para> <para>The escaping used will replace all characters which are - invalid in a bus object path by <literal>_</literal> followed by a + invalid in a bus object path by <literal>_</literal>, followed by a hexadecimal value. As a special case, the empty string will be replaced by a lone <literal>_</literal>.</para> </refsect1> @@ -118,8 +118,8 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>. returns positive or 0, and a valid bus path in the return argument. On success, <function>sd_bus_path_decode()</function> returns a positive value if the prefixed matched, or 0 if it - did not. If the prefix matched the external identifier is returned - in the return parameter. If it did not match NULL is returned in + did not. If the prefix matched, the external identifier is returned + in the return parameter. If it did not match, NULL is returned in the return parameter. On failure, a negative errno-style error number is returned by either function. The returned strings must be |