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| author | Jan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de> | 2013-12-26 02:47:45 +0100 |
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| committer | Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl> | 2013-12-25 22:53:46 -0500 |
| commit | e0e009c067aa7237f9683c46e5845bbb11ec67c2 (patch) | |
| tree | d2c31f3f444bfa569569ac195e2778c475a67c26 /man/sd_bus_request_name.xml | |
| parent | b040723ea412209e0edf54647fa5aa4287411507 (diff) | |
man: grammar and wording improvements
This is a recurring submission and includes corrections to:
- missing words, preposition choice.
- change of /lib to /usr/lib, because that is what most distros are
using as the system-wide location for systemd/udev files.
Diffstat (limited to 'man/sd_bus_request_name.xml')
| -rw-r--r-- | man/sd_bus_request_name.xml | 20 |
1 files changed, 10 insertions, 10 deletions
diff --git a/man/sd_bus_request_name.xml b/man/sd_bus_request_name.xml index c84b0b62fa..7393fdd90e 100644 --- a/man/sd_bus_request_name.xml +++ b/man/sd_bus_request_name.xml @@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ <term><varname>SD_BUS_NAME_ALLOW_REPLACEMENT</varname></term> <listitem><para>After acquiring the - name successuflly, permit other peers + name successfully, permit other peers to take over the name when they try to acquire it with the <varname>SD_BUS_NAME_REPLACE_EXISTING</varname> @@ -95,10 +95,10 @@ <varlistentry> <term><varname>SD_BUS_NAME_REPLACE_EXISTING</varname></term> - <listitem><para>Take over a the name - if it is already acquired by a another - peer, and that other peer permitted - taking it over by setting + <listitem><para>Take over the name + if it is already acquired by another + peer, and that other peer has permitted + takeover by setting <varname>SD_BUS_NAME_ALLOW_REPLACEMENT</varname> while acquiring it.</para></listitem> </varlistentry> @@ -106,8 +106,8 @@ <varlistentry> <term><varname>SD_BUS_NAME_QUEUE</varname></term> - <listitem><para>Queue name - acquisition when the name is already + <listitem><para>Queue the acquisition + of the name when the name is already taken.</para></listitem> </varlistentry> </variablelist> @@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ <varlistentry> <term><varname>-ESRCH</varname></term> - <listitem><para>It was attemted to + <listitem><para>It was attempted to release a name that is currently not registered on the bus.</para></listitem> @@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ <varlistentry> <term><varname>-EADDRINUSE</varname></term> - <listitem><para>It was attemted to + <listitem><para>It was attempted to release a name that is owned by a different peer on the bus.</para></listitem> @@ -199,7 +199,7 @@ <listitem><para>The bus connection has been created in a different process - than the current.</para></listitem> + than the current one.</para></listitem> </varlistentry> </variablelist> </refsect1> |