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authorJan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de>2013-09-12 21:12:49 +0200
committerLennart Poettering <lennart@poettering.net>2013-09-12 22:09:57 +0200
commit79640424059328268b9fb6c5fa8eb777b27a177e (patch)
treee3579216d1afd438e667044869dcdf9c732ef18c /man/sd_notify.xml
parent982e44dbc3e70c97e83464a30354b80973d52b41 (diff)
man: wording and grammar updates
This is a recurring submission and includes corrections to various issue spotted. I guess I can just skip over reporting ubiquitous comma placement fixes… Highligts in this particular commit: - the "unsigned" type qualifier is completed to form a full type "unsigned int" - alphabetic -> lexicographic (that way we automatically define how numbers get sorted)
Diffstat (limited to 'man/sd_notify.xml')
-rw-r--r--man/sd_notify.xml8
1 files changed, 4 insertions, 4 deletions
diff --git a/man/sd_notify.xml b/man/sd_notify.xml
index fc0f2f6927..55965ffce4 100644
--- a/man/sd_notify.xml
+++ b/man/sd_notify.xml
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@
notification.</para>
<para>If the <parameter>unset_environment</parameter>
- parameter is non-zero <function>sd_notify()</function>
+ parameter is non-zero, <function>sd_notify()</function>
will unset the <varname>$NOTIFY_SOCKET</varname>
environment variable before returning (regardless
whether the function call itself succeeded or
@@ -197,7 +197,7 @@
errno-style error code. If
<varname>$NOTIFY_SOCKET</varname> was not set and
hence no status data could be sent, 0 is returned. If
- the status was sent these functions return with a
+ the status was sent, these functions return with a
positive return value. In order to support both, init
systems that implement this scheme and those which
do not, it is generally recommended to ignore the return
@@ -220,7 +220,7 @@
<constant>AF_UNIX</constant> socket referenced in the
<varname>$NOTIFY_SOCKET</varname> environment
variable. If the first character of
- <varname>$NOTIFY_SOCKET</varname> is <literal>@</literal> the string is
+ <varname>$NOTIFY_SOCKET</varname> is <literal>@</literal>, the string is
understood as Linux abstract namespace socket. The
datagram is accompanied by the process credentials of
the sending daemon, using SCM_CREDENTIALS.</para>
@@ -246,7 +246,7 @@
<para>If the reference implementation is used as
drop-in files and -DDISABLE_SYSTEMD is set during
- compilation these functions will always return 0 and
+ compilation, these functions will always return 0 and
otherwise become a NOP.</para>
</refsect1>