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| author | Jason St. John <jstjohn@purdue.edu> | 2013-06-27 21:51:44 +0200 |
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| committer | Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl> | 2013-07-02 23:06:22 -0400 |
| commit | e9dd9f9547350c7dc0473583b5c2228dc8f0ab76 (patch) | |
| tree | 8c40d1a1e527a09974839ac44a3b7b3d19232758 /man/systemctl.xml | |
| parent | 6824690f140f45064157d220a24b9afbeb1d093f (diff) | |
man: improve grammar and word formatting in numerous man pages
Use proper grammar, word usage, adjective hyphenation, commas,
capitalization, spelling, etc.
To improve readability, some run-on sentences or sentence fragments were
revised.
[zj: remove the space from 'file name', 'host name', and 'time zone'.]
Diffstat (limited to 'man/systemctl.xml')
| -rw-r--r-- | man/systemctl.xml | 4 |
1 files changed, 2 insertions, 2 deletions
diff --git a/man/systemctl.xml b/man/systemctl.xml index 9ab5c8ba5f..84a149c3d0 100644 --- a/man/systemctl.xml +++ b/man/systemctl.xml @@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>. <term><option>--type=</option></term> <listitem> - <para>The argument should be a comma separated list of unit + <para>The argument should be a comma-separated list of unit types such as <option>service</option> and <option>socket</option>, or unit load states such as <option>loaded</option> and <option>masked</option> @@ -732,7 +732,7 @@ kobject-uevent 1 systemd-udevd-kernel.socket systemd-udevd.service names such as <literal>cpu.shares</literal>. This will output the current values of the specified attributes, separated by new-lines. For attributes that take list of - items the output will be new-line separated, too. This + items the output will be new-line-separated, too. This operation will always try to retrieve the data in question from the kernel first, and if that is not available use the configured values instead. Instead of low-level control |