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| author | Jason St. John <jstjohn@purdue.edu> | 2013-06-27 21:51:44 +0200 |
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| committer | Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl> | 2013-07-02 23:06:22 -0400 |
| commit | e9dd9f9547350c7dc0473583b5c2228dc8f0ab76 (patch) | |
| tree | 8c40d1a1e527a09974839ac44a3b7b3d19232758 /man/systemd-analyze.xml | |
| parent | 6824690f140f45064157d220a24b9afbeb1d093f (diff) | |
man: improve grammar and word formatting in numerous man pages
Use proper grammar, word usage, adjective hyphenation, commas,
capitalization, spelling, etc.
To improve readability, some run-on sentences or sentence fragments were
revised.
[zj: remove the space from 'file name', 'host name', and 'time zone'.]
Diffstat (limited to 'man/systemd-analyze.xml')
| -rw-r--r-- | man/systemd-analyze.xml | 22 |
1 files changed, 11 insertions, 11 deletions
diff --git a/man/systemd-analyze.xml b/man/systemd-analyze.xml index cecf1bf4d3..f5a9424248 100644 --- a/man/systemd-analyze.xml +++ b/man/systemd-analyze.xml @@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ prints the time spent in the kernel before userspace has been reached, the time spent in the initial RAM disk (initrd) before normal system - userspace has been reached and the time normal system + userspace has been reached, and the time normal system userspace took to initialize. Note that these measurements simply measure the time passed up to the point where all system services have been spawned, but @@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ of another service to complete.</para> <para><command>systemd-analyze critical-chain [<replaceable>UNIT...</replaceable>]</command> - prints a tree of the time critical chain of units + prints a tree of the time-critical chain of units (for each of the specified <replaceable>UNIT</replaceable>s or for the default target otherwise). The time after the unit is active or started is printed @@ -135,7 +135,7 @@ dot | dot -Tsvg > systemd.svg</command> to generate a graphical dependency tree. Unless <option>--order</option> or <option>--require</option> - is passed the generated graph will show both ordering + is passed, the generated graph will show both ordering and requirement dependencies. Optional pattern globbing style specifications (e.g. <filename>*.target</filename>) may be given at @@ -143,7 +143,7 @@ any of these patterns match either the origin or destination node.</para> - <para>If no command is passed <command>systemd-analyze + <para>If no command is passed, <command>systemd-analyze time</command> is implied.</para> </refsect1> @@ -191,7 +191,7 @@ <varname>RequisiteOverridable=</varname>, <varname>Wants=</varname> and <varname>Conflicts=</varname> are - shown. If neither is passed, shows + shown. If neither is passed, this shows dependencies of all these types.</para></listitem> </varlistentry> @@ -203,16 +203,16 @@ <listitem><para>When used in conjunction with the <command>dot</command> command (see - above), selects which relationships + above), this selects which relationships are shown in the dependency graph. They both require <citerefentry><refentrytitle>glob</refentrytitle><manvolnum>7</manvolnum></citerefentry> patterns as arguments, which are - matched against lefthand and - righthand, respectively, nodes of a + matched against left-hand and + right-hand, respectively, nodes of a relationship. Each of these can be - used more than once which means a - unit name must match one of given + used more than once, which means a + unit name must match one of the given values.</para></listitem> </varlistentry> @@ -226,7 +226,7 @@ latest unit in the same level. The unit of <replaceable>timespan</replaceable> is seconds unless specified with a different unit, - i.e. "50ms".</para></listitem> + e.g. "50ms".</para></listitem> </varlistentry> </variablelist> |