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| author | Jason St. John <jstjohn@purdue.edu> | 2013-06-27 21:51:44 +0200 |
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| committer | Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl> | 2013-07-02 23:06:22 -0400 |
| commit | e9dd9f9547350c7dc0473583b5c2228dc8f0ab76 (patch) | |
| tree | 8c40d1a1e527a09974839ac44a3b7b3d19232758 /man/systemd-inhibit.xml | |
| parent | 6824690f140f45064157d220a24b9afbeb1d093f (diff) | |
man: improve grammar and word formatting in numerous man pages
Use proper grammar, word usage, adjective hyphenation, commas,
capitalization, spelling, etc.
To improve readability, some run-on sentences or sentence fragments were
revised.
[zj: remove the space from 'file name', 'host name', and 'time zone'.]
Diffstat (limited to 'man/systemd-inhibit.xml')
| -rw-r--r-- | man/systemd-inhibit.xml | 16 |
1 files changed, 8 insertions, 8 deletions
diff --git a/man/systemd-inhibit.xml b/man/systemd-inhibit.xml index 6f63c8c73e..de2f264147 100644 --- a/man/systemd-inhibit.xml +++ b/man/systemd-inhibit.xml @@ -101,8 +101,8 @@ <varlistentry> <term><option>--what=</option></term> - <listitem><para>Takes a colon - separated list of one or more + <listitem><para>Takes a colon-separated + list of one or more operations to inhibit: <literal>shutdown</literal>, <literal>sleep</literal>, @@ -124,9 +124,9 @@ <varlistentry> <term><option>--who=</option></term> - <listitem><para>Takes a short human - readable descriptive string for the - program taking the lock. If not passed + <listitem><para>Takes a short, + human-readable descriptive string for the + program taking the lock. If not passed, defaults to the command line string.</para></listitem> </varlistentry> @@ -134,8 +134,8 @@ <varlistentry> <term><option>--why=</option></term> - <listitem><para>Takes a short human - readable descriptive string for the + <listitem><para>Takes a short, + human-readable descriptive string for the reason for taking the lock. Defaults to "Unknown reason".</para></listitem> </varlistentry> @@ -155,7 +155,7 @@ <literal>delay</literal> is used, the lock can only delay the requested operations for a limited time. If the - time elapses the lock is ignored and + time elapses, the lock is ignored and the operation executed. The time limit may be specified in <citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd-logind.conf</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>. Note |