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authorJason St. John <jstjohn@purdue.edu>2013-06-27 21:51:44 +0200
committerZbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl>2013-07-02 23:06:22 -0400
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parent6824690f140f45064157d220a24b9afbeb1d093f (diff)
man: improve grammar and word formatting in numerous man pages
Use proper grammar, word usage, adjective hyphenation, commas, capitalization, spelling, etc. To improve readability, some run-on sentences or sentence fragments were revised. [zj: remove the space from 'file name', 'host name', and 'time zone'.]
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diff --git a/man/systemd-inhibit.xml b/man/systemd-inhibit.xml
index 6f63c8c73e..de2f264147 100644
--- a/man/systemd-inhibit.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-inhibit.xml
@@ -101,8 +101,8 @@
<varlistentry>
<term><option>--what=</option></term>
- <listitem><para>Takes a colon
- separated list of one or more
+ <listitem><para>Takes a colon-separated
+ list of one or more
operations to inhibit:
<literal>shutdown</literal>,
<literal>sleep</literal>,
@@ -124,9 +124,9 @@
<varlistentry>
<term><option>--who=</option></term>
- <listitem><para>Takes a short human
- readable descriptive string for the
- program taking the lock. If not passed
+ <listitem><para>Takes a short,
+ human-readable descriptive string for the
+ program taking the lock. If not passed,
defaults to the command line
string.</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>
@@ -134,8 +134,8 @@
<varlistentry>
<term><option>--why=</option></term>
- <listitem><para>Takes a short human
- readable descriptive string for the
+ <listitem><para>Takes a short,
+ human-readable descriptive string for the
reason for taking the lock. Defaults
to "Unknown reason".</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>
@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@
<literal>delay</literal> is used, the
lock can only delay the requested
operations for a limited time. If the
- time elapses the lock is ignored and
+ time elapses, the lock is ignored and
the operation executed. The time limit
may be specified in
<citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd-logind.conf</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>. Note