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| author | Jan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de> | 2013-09-12 21:12:49 +0200 |
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| committer | Lennart Poettering <lennart@poettering.net> | 2013-09-12 22:09:57 +0200 |
| commit | 79640424059328268b9fb6c5fa8eb777b27a177e (patch) | |
| tree | e3579216d1afd438e667044869dcdf9c732ef18c /man/systemd.socket.xml | |
| parent | 982e44dbc3e70c97e83464a30354b80973d52b41 (diff) | |
man: wording and grammar updates
This is a recurring submission and includes corrections to various
issue spotted. I guess I can just skip over reporting ubiquitous
comma placement fixes…
Highligts in this particular commit:
- the "unsigned" type qualifier is completed to form a full type
"unsigned int"
- alphabetic -> lexicographic (that way we automatically define how
numbers get sorted)
Diffstat (limited to 'man/systemd.socket.xml')
| -rw-r--r-- | man/systemd.socket.xml | 16 |
1 files changed, 8 insertions, 8 deletions
diff --git a/man/systemd.socket.xml b/man/systemd.socket.xml index 1fc28c54e4..419a38caa7 100644 --- a/man/systemd.socket.xml +++ b/man/systemd.socket.xml @@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ <filename>foo.socket</filename> needs a matching service <filename>foo.service</filename> if <option>Accept=false</option> is set. If - <option>Accept=true</option> is set a service template + <option>Accept=true</option> is set, a service template file <filename>foo@.service</filename> must exist from which services are instantiated for each incoming connection.</para> @@ -164,17 +164,17 @@ family.</para> <para>If the address starts with an at - symbol (<literal>@</literal>) it is read as abstract + symbol (<literal>@</literal>), it is read as abstract namespace socket in the <constant>AF_UNIX</constant> family. The <literal>@</literal> is replaced with a <constant>NUL</constant> character - before binding. For details see + before binding. For details, see <citerefentry><refentrytitle>unix</refentrytitle><manvolnum>7</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para> <para>If the address string is a - single number it is read as port + single number, it is read as port number to listen on via IPv6. Depending on the value of <varname>BindIPv6Only=</varname> (see below) this @@ -184,13 +184,13 @@ </para> <para>If the address string is a - string in the format v.w.x.y:z it is + string in the format v.w.x.y:z, it is read as IPv4 specifier for listening on an address v.w.x.y on a port z.</para> <para>If the address string is a - string in the format [x]:y it is read + string in the format [x]:y, it is read as IPv6 address x on a port y. Note that this might make the service available via IPv4, too, depending on @@ -303,7 +303,7 @@ <option>ipv6-only</option>, they will be accessible via IPv6 only. If <option>default</option> (which is the - default, surprise!) the system wide + default, surprise!), the system wide default setting is used, as controlled by <filename>/proc/sys/net/ipv6/bindv6only</filename>, @@ -330,7 +330,7 @@ <term><varname>BindToDevice=</varname></term> <listitem><para>Specifies a network interface name to bind this socket - to. If set traffic will only be + to. If set, traffic will only be accepted from the specified network interfaces. This controls the SO_BINDTODEVICE socket option (see |