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authorJan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de>2013-11-07 01:17:48 +0100
committerZbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl>2013-11-07 01:23:54 -0500
commit63ba209d8bc64137ff1585d5878328c93cb81b61 (patch)
tree3f2012a37e823e5a755e5b3137b25d4dd99f9c88 /man
parentf576cd2092bc40f9998415cdc3caf10035d4743a (diff)
man: wording and grammar updates
This is a recurring submission and includes corrections to various issue spotted: comma setting, missing words/preposition choice.
Diffstat (limited to 'man')
-rw-r--r--man/hostnamectl.xml2
-rw-r--r--man/localectl.xml2
-rw-r--r--man/loginctl.xml2
-rw-r--r--man/machinectl.xml6
-rw-r--r--man/systemctl.xml8
-rw-r--r--man/systemd-analyze.xml4
-rw-r--r--man/systemd-halt.service.xml4
-rw-r--r--man/systemd-run.xml4
-rw-r--r--man/systemd-socket-proxyd.xml2
-rw-r--r--man/systemd-system.conf.xml6
-rw-r--r--man/systemd.mount.xml4
-rw-r--r--man/systemd.service.xml6
-rw-r--r--man/systemd.socket.xml2
-rw-r--r--man/systemd.swap.xml2
-rw-r--r--man/timedatectl.xml2
15 files changed, 28 insertions, 28 deletions
diff --git a/man/hostnamectl.xml b/man/hostnamectl.xml
index b39fb5502b..29914b8c8d 100644
--- a/man/hostnamectl.xml
+++ b/man/hostnamectl.xml
@@ -133,7 +133,7 @@
remotely. Specify a hostname, or
username and hostname separated by <literal>@</literal>,
to connect to. This will use SSH to
- talk to a remote
+ talk to the remote
system.</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>
diff --git a/man/localectl.xml b/man/localectl.xml
index ad4f3d41f0..0950cce97d 100644
--- a/man/localectl.xml
+++ b/man/localectl.xml
@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@
remotely. Specify a hostname, or
username and hostname separated by <literal>@</literal>,
to connect to. This will use SSH to
- talk to a remote
+ talk to the remote
system.</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>
diff --git a/man/loginctl.xml b/man/loginctl.xml
index 1b54ff7dc3..7d4f26a3e7 100644
--- a/man/loginctl.xml
+++ b/man/loginctl.xml
@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@
<term><option>-H</option></term>
<term><option>--host</option></term>
- <listitem><para>Execute operation
+ <listitem><para>Execute the operation
remotely. Specify a hostname, or
username and hostname separated by <literal>@</literal>,
to connect to. This will use SSH to
diff --git a/man/machinectl.xml b/man/machinectl.xml
index c06d0c7abb..ec2aaa56d7 100644
--- a/man/machinectl.xml
+++ b/man/machinectl.xml
@@ -105,7 +105,7 @@
<term><option>-H</option></term>
<term><option>--host=</option></term>
- <listitem><para>Execute operation
+ <listitem><para>Execute the operation
remotely. Specify a hostname, or
username and hostname separated by <literal>@</literal>,
to connect to. This will use SSH to
@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@
<term><option>-M</option></term>
<term><option>--machine=</option></term>
- <listitem><para>Execute operation on a
+ <listitem><para>Execute the operation on a
local container. Specify a container
name to connect to.</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>
@@ -270,7 +270,7 @@
<listitem><para>Open a terminal login
session to a container. This will
create a TTY connection to a specific
- container and asks for execution of a
+ container and asks for the execution of a
getty on it. Note that this is only
supported for containers running
<citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>
diff --git a/man/systemctl.xml b/man/systemctl.xml
index 605b7869b2..c7313edcc2 100644
--- a/man/systemctl.xml
+++ b/man/systemctl.xml
@@ -64,15 +64,15 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
<citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>
system and service manager.</para>
- <para>For Unit Commands the <replaceable>NAME</replaceable> represents full name of unit.
+ <para>For unit commands, the <replaceable>NAME</replaceable> represents full name of the unit.
<programlisting>
systemctl start foo.service
</programlisting>
- For Unit File Commands the <replaceable>NAME</replaceable> represents full name of the unit file, or absolute path to the unit file.
+ For unit file commands, the <replaceable>NAME</replaceable> represents the full name of the unit file, or the absolute path to the unit file.
<programlisting>
systemctl start /path/to/foo.service
</programlisting>
- While working with services/service files, <command>systemctl</command> is able to append .service suffix when it is missing.
+ While working with services/service files, <command>systemctl</command> implicitly appends the ".service" suffix when it is missing.
<programlisting>
systemctl start foo
</programlisting></para>
@@ -457,7 +457,7 @@ systemctl start foo
<term><option>--host</option></term>
<listitem>
- <para>Execute operation remotely. Specify a hostname, or
+ <para>Execute the operation remotely. Specify a hostname, or
username and hostname separated by <literal>@</literal>, to connect to. This
will use SSH to talk to the remote systemd
instance.</para>
diff --git a/man/systemd-analyze.xml b/man/systemd-analyze.xml
index 3141361e56..1898ca6fb1 100644
--- a/man/systemd-analyze.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-analyze.xml
@@ -209,7 +209,7 @@
<term><option>-H</option></term>
<term><option>--host=</option></term>
- <listitem><para>Execute operation
+ <listitem><para>Execute the operation
remotely. Specify a hostname, or
username and hostname separated by
<literal>@</literal>, to connect
@@ -222,7 +222,7 @@
<term><option>-M</option></term>
<term><option>--machine=</option></term>
- <listitem><para>Execute operation on a
+ <listitem><para>Execute the operation on a
local container. Specify a container
name to connect to.</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>
diff --git a/man/systemd-halt.service.xml b/man/systemd-halt.service.xml
index 812281e60d..2fd7b8bf80 100644
--- a/man/systemd-halt.service.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-halt.service.xml
@@ -74,11 +74,11 @@
<filename>kexec.target</filename> to execute the
respective actions.</para>
- <para>When these services are run they ensure that PID
+ <para>When these services are run, they ensure that PID
1 is replaced by the
<filename>/usr/lib/systemd/systemd-shutdown</filename>
tool which is then responsible for the actual
- shutdown. Before shutting down this binary will try to
+ shutdown. Before shutting down, this binary will try to
unmount all remaining file systems, disable all
remaining swap devices, detach all remaining storage
devices and kill all remaining processes.</para>
diff --git a/man/systemd-run.xml b/man/systemd-run.xml
index 031c207cc3..daf2bdcbb6 100644
--- a/man/systemd-run.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-run.xml
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
<term><option>-H</option></term>
<term><option>--host=</option></term>
- <listitem><para>Execute operation
+ <listitem><para>Execute the operation
remotely. Specify a hostname, or
username and hostname separated by <literal>@</literal>,
to connect to. This will use SSH to
@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
<term><option>-M</option></term>
<term><option>--machine=</option></term>
- <listitem><para>Execute operation on a
+ <listitem><para>Execute the operation on a
local container. Specify a container
name to connect to.</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>
diff --git a/man/systemd-socket-proxyd.xml b/man/systemd-socket-proxyd.xml
index fcf4aafd60..6983346396 100644
--- a/man/systemd-socket-proxyd.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-socket-proxyd.xml
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@
local or remote destination socket.</para>
<para>One use of this tool is to provide
- socket-activation support for services that do not
+ socket activation support for services that do not
natively support socket activation. On behalf of the
service to activate, the proxy inherits the socket
from systemd, accepts each client connection, opens a
diff --git a/man/systemd-system.conf.xml b/man/systemd-system.conf.xml
index c1f26484ee..2a0a10c05b 100644
--- a/man/systemd-system.conf.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-system.conf.xml
@@ -101,15 +101,15 @@
<listitem><para>Configures the default
time-outs for starting and stopping of
units, as well as the default time to
- sleep between automatic restarts of a
+ sleep between automatic restarts of
units, as configured per-unit in
<varname>TimeoutStartSec=</varname>,
<varname>TimeoutStopSec=</varname> and
<varname>RestartSec=</varname> (for
- service units see
+ service units, see
<citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd.service</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>
for details on the per-unit
- settings). For non-service units
+ settings). For non-service units,
<varname>DefaultTimeoutStartSec=</varname>
sets the default
<varname>TimeoutSec=</varname> value.
diff --git a/man/systemd.mount.xml b/man/systemd.mount.xml
index daf1189183..bd50f352e7 100644
--- a/man/systemd.mount.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.mount.xml
@@ -260,8 +260,8 @@
Takes a unit-less value in seconds, or
a time span value such as "5min
20s". Pass 0 to disable the timeout
- logic. Default value is setted up in manager configuration
- file via <varname>DefaultTimeoutStart=</varname>.</para></listitem>
+ logic. The default value is set from the manager configuration
+ file's <varname>DefaultTimeoutStart=</varname> variable.</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>
</variablelist>
diff --git a/man/systemd.service.xml b/man/systemd.service.xml
index 0cb3d9e351..d1f4a2d7d7 100644
--- a/man/systemd.service.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.service.xml
@@ -524,10 +524,10 @@
Takes a unit-less value in seconds, or a
time span value such as "5min
20s". Pass 0 to disable the timeout
- logic. Defaults to <varname>TimeoutStartSec=</varname> in
+ logic. Defaults to <varname>TimeoutStartSec=</varname> from the
manager configuration file, except when
<varname>Type=oneshot</varname> is
- used in which case the timeout
+ used, in which case the timeout
is disabled by default.
</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>
@@ -546,7 +546,7 @@
Takes a unit-less value in seconds, or a
time span value such as "5min
20s". Pass 0 to disable the timeout
- logic. Defaults to <varname>TimeoutStartSec=</varname> in
+ logic. Defaults to <varname>TimeoutStartSec=</varname> from the
manager configuration file.
</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>
diff --git a/man/systemd.socket.xml b/man/systemd.socket.xml
index 1c78562e8a..7c10c5858b 100644
--- a/man/systemd.socket.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.socket.xml
@@ -679,7 +679,7 @@
Takes a unit-less value in seconds, or
a time span value such as "5min
20s". Pass 0 to disable the timeout
- logic. Defaults to <varname>TimeoutStartSec=</varname> in
+ logic. Defaults to <varname>TimeoutStartSec=</varname> from the
manager configuration file.</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>
diff --git a/man/systemd.swap.xml b/man/systemd.swap.xml
index 13f6c8441a..0411232853 100644
--- a/man/systemd.swap.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.swap.xml
@@ -186,7 +186,7 @@
Takes a unit-less value in seconds, or
a time span value such as "5min
20s". Pass 0 to disable the timeout
- logic. Defaults to <varname>TimeoutStartSec=</varname> in
+ logic. Defaults to <varname>TimeoutStartSec=</varname> from the
manager configuration file.</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>
</variablelist>
diff --git a/man/timedatectl.xml b/man/timedatectl.xml
index 2dd6beb968..afcb716e4e 100644
--- a/man/timedatectl.xml
+++ b/man/timedatectl.xml
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@
<term><option>-H</option></term>
<term><option>--host=</option></term>
- <listitem><para>Execute operation
+ <listitem><para>Execute the operation
remotely. Specify a hostname, or
username and hostname separated by <literal>@</literal>,
to connect to. This will use SSH to