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authorJan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de>2014-02-17 02:49:45 +0100
committerZbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl>2014-02-17 19:03:07 -0500
commitdc968941bfc9be464e1df15afa05693dec3ec192 (patch)
tree4a6390afb279dd0406e2f8d68843b6a918f9cc14 /man
parent66f756d437658cc464bfb5647c97efd0cf77f933 (diff)
doc: choose different words to improve clarity
I suggest the following changes to improve the way the text reads ("flows").
Diffstat (limited to 'man')
-rw-r--r--man/crypttab.xml6
-rw-r--r--man/sd_bus_creds_get_pid.xml2
-rw-r--r--man/sd_bus_message_get_monotonic_usec.xml2
3 files changed, 5 insertions, 5 deletions
diff --git a/man/crypttab.xml b/man/crypttab.xml
index 2d4150013b..668e51dc06 100644
--- a/man/crypttab.xml
+++ b/man/crypttab.xml
@@ -171,7 +171,7 @@
If the key slot does not match the given
passphrase or key, but another would, the
setup of the device will fail regardless.
- This implies <varname>luks</varname>. See
+ This option implies <varname>luks</varname>. See
<citerefentry><refentrytitle>cryptsetup</refentrytitle><manvolnum>8</manvolnum></citerefentry>
for possible values. The default is to try
all key slots in sequential order.</para></listitem>
@@ -275,7 +275,7 @@
<term><varname>tcrypt-hidden</varname></term>
<listitem><para>Use the hidden TrueCrypt volume.
- This implies <varname>tcrypt</varname>.</para>
+ This option implies <varname>tcrypt</varname>.</para>
<para>This will map the hidden volume that is
inside of the volume provided in the second
@@ -304,7 +304,7 @@
<term><varname>tcrypt-system</varname></term>
<listitem><para>Use TrueCrypt in system
- encryption mode. This implies
+ encryption mode. This option implies
<varname>tcrypt</varname>.</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>
diff --git a/man/sd_bus_creds_get_pid.xml b/man/sd_bus_creds_get_pid.xml
index 25978a2895..a35efef0ca 100644
--- a/man/sd_bus_creds_get_pid.xml
+++ b/man/sd_bus_creds_get_pid.xml
@@ -252,7 +252,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
numeric GID (group identifier).</para>
<para><function>sd_bus_creds_get_comm</function> will retrieve the
- comm field (name of the executable, as stored in
+ comm field (truncated name of the executable, as stored in
<filename>/proc/<replaceable>pid</replaceable>/comm</filename>).
</para>
diff --git a/man/sd_bus_message_get_monotonic_usec.xml b/man/sd_bus_message_get_monotonic_usec.xml
index 57b115c63a..b9437ff62e 100644
--- a/man/sd_bus_message_get_monotonic_usec.xml
+++ b/man/sd_bus_message_get_monotonic_usec.xml
@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@
<para>These timestamps and the sequence number are
attached to each message by the kernel and cannot be
- manipulated by the sending userspace.</para>
+ manipulated by the sender.</para>
<para>Note that these timestamps are only available on
some bus transports, and only after support for them