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author | Conrad Meyer <cemeyer@cs.washington.edu> | 2010-07-06 18:24:38 -0700 |
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committer | Lennart Poettering <lennart@poettering.net> | 2010-07-07 03:40:12 +0200 |
commit | ad678a066b4ba5d8914dd7d5a4093572841205cf (patch) | |
tree | 86ba4f1da18735719d50cab2b325c13a5939f1bd /man | |
parent | 7b97f4773207d9e1301f5263229ceba26b515756 (diff) |
man: minor edits to daemon, sd_listen_fds, sd_notify, systemctl, systemd.exec, systemd, and systemd.timer pages
Just some minor grammar fixes.
Diffstat (limited to 'man')
-rw-r--r-- | man/daemon.xml | 10 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | man/sd_listen_fds.xml | 4 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | man/sd_notify.xml | 2 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | man/systemctl.xml | 2 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | man/systemd.exec.xml | 6 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | man/systemd.timer.xml | 4 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | man/systemd.xml | 2 |
7 files changed, 15 insertions, 15 deletions
diff --git a/man/daemon.xml b/man/daemon.xml index 8e9e939532..dfee390164 100644 --- a/man/daemon.xml +++ b/man/daemon.xml @@ -384,7 +384,7 @@ communication channels are established already, and no request is lost because client requests will be queued by the bus system (in case of D-Bus) or the kernel (in - case of sockets), until the activation + case of sockets), until the activation is completed.</para> <refsect2> @@ -726,7 +726,7 @@ install their systemd unit files in the directory returned by <command>pkg-config systemd - --variable=systemdsystemnunitdir</command> + --variable=systemdsystemunitdir</command> (for system services), resp. <command>pkg-config systemd --variable=systemdsessionunitdir</command> @@ -809,8 +809,8 @@ fi</programlisting> <para>Since new-style init systems such as systemd are compatible with traditional SysV init systems it is not strictly necessary to port existing daemons to the - new style. However doing this offers additional - functionality to the daemons as well as it simplifies + new style. However doing so offers additional + functionality to the daemons as well as simplifying integration into new-style init systems.</para> <para>To port an existing SysV compatible daemon the @@ -849,7 +849,7 @@ fi</programlisting> left-over file descriptors are passed to executed processes, it might be a good choice to simply skip the closing of all remaining - open file descriptors if file descriptors are + open file descriptors if sockets are passed.</para></listitem> <listitem><para>Write and install a systemd diff --git a/man/sd_listen_fds.xml b/man/sd_listen_fds.xml index 06403ecaa3..6fb8d27f24 100644 --- a/man/sd_listen_fds.xml +++ b/man/sd_listen_fds.xml @@ -109,8 +109,8 @@ <para>On failure, this call returns a negative errno-style error code. If <varname>$LISTEN_FDS</varname>/<varname>$LISTEN_PID</varname> - was not set or not correctly set for this daemon and - hence no file descriptors received, 0 is + was not set or was not correctly set for this daemon and + hence no file descriptors were received, 0 is returned. Otherwise the number of file descriptors passed is returned. The application may find them starting with file descriptor SD_LISTEN_FDS_START, diff --git a/man/sd_notify.xml b/man/sd_notify.xml index 80856a22d5..7c1d982d85 100644 --- a/man/sd_notify.xml +++ b/man/sd_notify.xml @@ -252,7 +252,7 @@ <title>Start-up Notification</title> <para>When a daemon finished starting up, it - might issue the following call call to notify + might issue the following call to notify the init system:</para> <programlisting>sd_notify(0, "READY=1");</programlisting> diff --git a/man/systemctl.xml b/man/systemctl.xml index c0b8d7927d..a7065f98ae 100644 --- a/man/systemctl.xml +++ b/man/systemctl.xml @@ -381,7 +381,7 @@ unit files and recreate the entire dependency tree. While the daemon is reloaded, all sockets systemd listens - on on behalf of user configuration, will + on on behalf of user configuration will stay accessible.</para> <para>This command should not be confused with the <command>load</command> or diff --git a/man/systemd.exec.xml b/man/systemd.exec.xml index 68495dcaf7..a47a62daec 100644 --- a/man/systemd.exec.xml +++ b/man/systemd.exec.xml @@ -374,13 +374,13 @@ <option>inherit</option>.</para></listitem> </varlistentry> <varlistentry> - <term><varname>StandardOutput=</varname></term> + <term><varname>StandardError=</varname></term> <listitem><para>Controls where file descriptor 2 (STDERR) of the executed processes is connected to. The available options are identical to those of - <varname>StandardError=</varname>, + <varname>StandardOutput=</varname>, whith one exception: if set to <option>inherit</option> the file descriptor used for standard output is @@ -617,7 +617,7 @@ <listitem><para>Controls the control groups the executed processes shall be - made member of. Takes a + made members of. Takes a space-seperated list of cgroup identifiers. A cgroup identifier has a format like diff --git a/man/systemd.timer.xml b/man/systemd.timer.xml index 518ae2a9f1..9b6b486bf4 100644 --- a/man/systemd.timer.xml +++ b/man/systemd.timer.xml @@ -170,10 +170,10 @@ specified, this value defaults to a service that has the same name as the timer unit, except for the - suffix. (See above.) It is recommended, + suffix. (See above.) It is recommended that the unit name that is activated and the unit name of the timer unit - are named identical, except for the + are named identically, except for the suffix.</para></listitem> </varlistentry> </variablelist> diff --git a/man/systemd.xml b/man/systemd.xml index ba775c5c91..4f4a588a98 100644 --- a/man/systemd.xml +++ b/man/systemd.xml @@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ <listitem><para>Extract D-Bus interface introspection data. This is - mostly useful at build at install time + mostly useful at install time to generate data suitable for the D-Bus interfaces repository. Optionally the interface |