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| author | Jan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de> | 2013-10-22 01:50:48 +0200 |
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| committer | Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl> | 2013-10-21 20:50:46 -0400 |
| commit | 19aadacf92ad86967ffb678e37b2ff9e83cb9480 (patch) | |
| tree | dae44c165a310295063a98b390be39de2f9d6c41 /man | |
| parent | 9ec9694ce3dbc137735b2992dfa305d0e5948815 (diff) | |
man: wording and grammar updates
This is a recurring submission and includes corrections to various
issue spotted.
Diffstat (limited to 'man')
| -rw-r--r-- | man/kernel-command-line.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | man/systemd-fstab-generator.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | man/systemd-socket-proxyd.xml | 10 |
3 files changed, 7 insertions, 7 deletions
diff --git a/man/kernel-command-line.xml b/man/kernel-command-line.xml index 612dc28cd5..afcff7cbb9 100644 --- a/man/kernel-command-line.xml +++ b/man/kernel-command-line.xml @@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ <varlistentry> <term><varname>systemd.restore_state=</varname></term> <listitem> - <para>Parameter understood by + <para>This parameter is understood by several system tools to control whether or not they should restore system state from the previous boot. diff --git a/man/systemd-fstab-generator.xml b/man/systemd-fstab-generator.xml index 7f7e83ea17..8996686e7a 100644 --- a/man/systemd-fstab-generator.xml +++ b/man/systemd-fstab-generator.xml @@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ as necessary.</para> <para>The <varname>passno</varname> field - is treated like a simlpe boolean, and the ordering information + is treated like a simple boolean, and the ordering information is discarded. However, the root filesystem is checked before all the other filesystems.</para> diff --git a/man/systemd-socket-proxyd.xml b/man/systemd-socket-proxyd.xml index 87122f5381..9f2389a04c 100644 --- a/man/systemd-socket-proxyd.xml +++ b/man/systemd-socket-proxyd.xml @@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ <cmdsynopsis> <command>systemd-socket-proxyd</command> <arg choice="opt" rep="repeat">OPTIONS</arg> - <arg choice="plain"><replaceable>HOSTNAME-OR-IP</replaceable></arg> + <arg choice="plain"><replaceable>HOSTNAME-OR-IPADDR</replaceable></arg> <arg choice="plain"><replaceable>PORT-OR-SERVICE</replaceable></arg> </cmdsynopsis> <cmdsynopsis> @@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ for each client, and then bidirectionally forwards data between the two.</para> <para>This utility's behavior is similar to - <citerefentry><refentrytitle>socat</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum> </citerefentry>. + <citerefentry><refentrytitle>socat</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>. The main differences for <command>systemd-socket-proxyd</command> are support for socket activation with <literal>Accept=false</literal> and an event-driven @@ -98,9 +98,9 @@ <listitem> <para>Skips verification of the expected PID and file - descriptor numbers. Use if + descriptor numbers. Use this if invoked indirectly, for - example with a shell script + example, with a shell script rather than with <option>ExecStart=/usr/lib/systemd/systemd-socket-proxyd</option> </para> @@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ </refsect1> <refsect1> <title>Exit status</title> - <para>On success 0 is returned, a non-zero failure + <para>On success, 0 is returned, a non-zero failure code otherwise.</para> </refsect1> <refsect1> |