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diff --git a/man/systemd-analyze.xml b/man/systemd-analyze.xml
index cecf1bf4d3..f5a9424248 100644
--- a/man/systemd-analyze.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-analyze.xml
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@
prints the time spent in the kernel before
userspace has been reached, the time spent in the
initial RAM disk (initrd) before normal system
- userspace has been reached and the time normal system
+ userspace has been reached, and the time normal system
userspace took to initialize. Note that these
measurements simply measure the time passed up to the
point where all system services have been spawned, but
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@
of another service to complete.</para>
<para><command>systemd-analyze critical-chain [<replaceable>UNIT...</replaceable>]</command>
- prints a tree of the time critical chain of units
+ prints a tree of the time-critical chain of units
(for each of the specified <replaceable>UNIT</replaceable>s
or for the default target otherwise).
The time after the unit is active or started is printed
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@
dot | dot -Tsvg > systemd.svg</command> to generate a
graphical dependency tree. Unless
<option>--order</option> or <option>--require</option>
- is passed the generated graph will show both ordering
+ is passed, the generated graph will show both ordering
and requirement dependencies. Optional pattern
globbing style specifications
(e.g. <filename>*.target</filename>) may be given at
@@ -143,7 +143,7 @@
any of these patterns match either the origin or
destination node.</para>
- <para>If no command is passed <command>systemd-analyze
+ <para>If no command is passed, <command>systemd-analyze
time</command> is implied.</para>
</refsect1>
@@ -191,7 +191,7 @@
<varname>RequisiteOverridable=</varname>,
<varname>Wants=</varname> and
<varname>Conflicts=</varname> are
- shown. If neither is passed, shows
+ shown. If neither is passed, this shows
dependencies of all these
types.</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>
@@ -203,16 +203,16 @@
<listitem><para>When used in
conjunction with the
<command>dot</command> command (see
- above), selects which relationships
+ above), this selects which relationships
are shown in the dependency graph.
They both require
<citerefentry><refentrytitle>glob</refentrytitle><manvolnum>7</manvolnum></citerefentry>
patterns as arguments, which are
- matched against lefthand and
- righthand, respectively, nodes of a
+ matched against left-hand and
+ right-hand, respectively, nodes of a
relationship. Each of these can be
- used more than once which means a
- unit name must match one of given
+ used more than once, which means a
+ unit name must match one of the given
values.</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>
@@ -226,7 +226,7 @@
latest unit in the same level. The unit of
<replaceable>timespan</replaceable> is seconds
unless specified with a different unit,
- i.e. "50ms".</para></listitem>
+ e.g. "50ms".</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>
</variablelist>