From 409dee2e44e7dc73d6bf00d782938e4cb4105f5b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de>
Date: Tue, 2 Jul 2013 05:44:04 +0200
Subject: man: more grammar improvements

- place commas
- expand contractions (this is written prose :)
- add some missing words
---
 man/bootchart.conf.xml | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

(limited to 'man/bootchart.conf.xml')

diff --git a/man/bootchart.conf.xml b/man/bootchart.conf.xml
index 7fd47ebe96..68d10d4415 100644
--- a/man/bootchart.conf.xml
+++ b/man/bootchart.conf.xml
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@
                         <varlistentry>
                                 <term><varname>Samples=500</varname></term>
                                 <listitem><para>Configure the amount of samples to
-                                record total before bootchart exits. Each sample will
+                                record in total before bootchart exits. Each sample will
                                 record at intervals defined by Frequency=.</para></listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
 
@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@
 
                         <varlistentry>
                                 <term><varname>Output=[path]</varname></term>
-                                <listitem><para>Configures the output folder for writing
+                                <listitem><para>Configures the output directory for writing
                                 the graphs. By default, bootchart writes the graphs to
                                 <filename>/run/log</filename>.</para></listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
@@ -124,7 +124,7 @@
                         <varlistentry>
                                 <term><varname>PlotMemoryUsage=no</varname></term>
                                 <listitem><para>If set to yes, enables logging and graphing
-                                of processes PSS memory consumption.</para></listitem>
+                                of processes' PSS memory consumption.</para></listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
 
                         <varlistentry>
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