From 409dee2e44e7dc73d6bf00d782938e4cb4105f5b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de>
Date: Tue, 2 Jul 2013 05:44:04 +0200
Subject: man: more grammar improvements

- place commas
- expand contractions (this is written prose :)
- add some missing words
---
 man/localtime.xml | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

(limited to 'man/localtime.xml')

diff --git a/man/localtime.xml b/man/localtime.xml
index b95c2ee6be..b7fd1ba15d 100644
--- a/man/localtime.xml
+++ b/man/localtime.xml
@@ -74,9 +74,9 @@
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>tzfile</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>
                 timezone data for the configured timezone.</para>
 
-                <para>As the timezone identifier is extracted from
+                <para>Because the timezone identifier is extracted from
                 the symlink target name of
-                <filename>/etc/localtime</filename> this file may not
+                <filename>/etc/localtime</filename>, this file may not
                 be a normal file or hardlink.</para>
 
                 <para>The timezone may be overridden for individual
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