From e9dd9f9547350c7dc0473583b5c2228dc8f0ab76 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: "Jason St. John" <jstjohn@purdue.edu>
Date: Thu, 27 Jun 2013 21:51:44 +0200
Subject: man: improve grammar and word formatting in numerous man pages

Use proper grammar, word usage, adjective hyphenation, commas,
capitalization, spelling, etc.

To improve readability, some run-on sentences or sentence fragments were
revised.

[zj: remove the space from 'file name', 'host name', and 'time zone'.]
---
 man/localtime.xml | 12 ++++++------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

(limited to 'man/localtime.xml')

diff --git a/man/localtime.xml b/man/localtime.xml
index d3da4ed277..b95c2ee6be 100644
--- a/man/localtime.xml
+++ b/man/localtime.xml
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@
 
         <refnamediv>
                 <refname>localtime</refname>
-                <refpurpose>Local time zone configuration file</refpurpose>
+                <refpurpose>Local timezone configuration file</refpurpose>
         </refnamediv>
 
         <refsynopsisdiv>
@@ -62,24 +62,24 @@
                 <title>Description</title>
 
                 <para>The <filename>/etc/localtime</filename> file
-                configures the system-wide time zone of the local
+                configures the system-wide timezone of the local
                 system that is used by applications for presentation
                 to the user. It should be an absolute or relative
                 symbolic link pointing to
                 <filename>/usr/share/zoneinfo/</filename>, followed by
-                a time zone identifier such as
+                a timezone identifier such as
                 <literal>Europe/Berlin</literal> or
                 <literal>Etc/UTC</literal>.  The resulting link should
                 lead to the corresponding binary
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>tzfile</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>
-                time zone data for the configured time zone.</para>
+                timezone data for the configured timezone.</para>
 
-                <para>As the time zone identifier is extracted from
+                <para>As the timezone identifier is extracted from
                 the symlink target name of
                 <filename>/etc/localtime</filename> this file may not
                 be a normal file or hardlink.</para>
 
-                <para>The time zone may be overridden for individual
+                <para>The timezone may be overridden for individual
                 programs by using the TZ environment variable. See
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>environ</refentrytitle><manvolnum>7</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para>
 
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