From 79640424059328268b9fb6c5fa8eb777b27a177e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jan Engelhardt Date: Thu, 12 Sep 2013 21:12:49 +0200 Subject: man: wording and grammar updates MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit This is a recurring submission and includes corrections to various issue spotted. I guess I can just skip over reporting ubiquitous comma placement fixes… Highligts in this particular commit: - the "unsigned" type qualifier is completed to form a full type "unsigned int" - alphabetic -> lexicographic (that way we automatically define how numbers get sorted) --- man/machine-info.xml | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) (limited to 'man/machine-info.xml') diff --git a/man/machine-info.xml b/man/machine-info.xml index 7f396aafde..ddf8f8b3d0 100644 --- a/man/machine-info.xml +++ b/man/machine-info.xml @@ -94,13 +94,13 @@ PRETTY_HOSTNAME= A pretty - human-readable UTF8 machine identifier + human-readable UTF-8 machine identifier string. This should contain a name like Lennart's Laptop which is useful to present to the user and does not suffer by the syntax limitations of - internet domain names. If possible the + internet domain names. If possible, the internet hostname as configured in /etc/hostname should be kept similar to this @@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ an Internet hostname of lennarts-computer might be a good choice. If this - parameter is not set an application + parameter is not set, an application should fall back to the Internet host name for presentation purposes. @@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ this machine according to the XDG Icon Naming Specification. If - this parameter is not set an + this parameter is not set, an application should fall back to computer or a similar icon name. -- cgit v1.2.3-54-g00ecf