From b938cb902c3b5bca807a94b277672c64d6767886 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de>
Date: Sun, 3 Aug 2014 07:11:12 +0200
Subject: doc: correct punctuation and improve typography in documentation

---
 man/sd_bus_creds_new_from_pid.xml | 14 +++++++-------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

(limited to 'man/sd_bus_creds_new_from_pid.xml')

diff --git a/man/sd_bus_creds_new_from_pid.xml b/man/sd_bus_creds_new_from_pid.xml
index a78d3f5717..0194936692 100644
--- a/man/sd_bus_creds_new_from_pid.xml
+++ b/man/sd_bus_creds_new_from_pid.xml
@@ -191,25 +191,25 @@
     subset of fields requested in <parameter>creds_mask</parameter>.
     </para>
 
-    <para>Similar to <function>sd_bus_creds_get_mask()</function> the
+    <para>Similar to <function>sd_bus_creds_get_mask()</function>, the
     function <function>sd_bus_creds_get_augmented_mask()</function>
     returns a bitmask of field constants. The mask indicates which
     credential fields have been retrieved in a non-atomic fashion. For
     credential objects created via
-    <function>sd_bus_creds_new_from_pid()</function> this mask will be
+    <function>sd_bus_creds_new_from_pid()</function>, this mask will be
     identical to the mask returned by
     <function>sd_bus_creds_get_mask()</function>. However, for
     credential objects retrieved via
-    <function>sd_bus_get_name_creds()</function> this mask will be set
+    <function>sd_bus_get_name_creds()</function>, this mask will be set
     for the credential fields that could not be determined atomically
     at peer connection time, and which were later added by reading
     augmenting credential data from
     <filename>/proc</filename>. Similar, for credential objects
-    retrieved via <function>sd_bus_get_owner_creds()</function> the
+    retrieved via <function>sd_bus_get_owner_creds()</function>, the
     mask is set for the fields that could not be determined atomically
     at bus creation time, but have been augmented. Similar, for
     credential objects retrieved via
-    <function>sd_bus_message_get_creds()</function> the mask is set
+    <function>sd_bus_message_get_creds()</function>, the mask is set
     for the fields that could not be determined atomically at message
     send time, but have been augmented. The mask returned by
     <function>sd_bus_creds_get_augmented_mask()</function> is always a
@@ -218,8 +218,8 @@
     object. The latter call hence returns all credential fields
     available in the credential object, the former then marks the
     subset of those that have been augmented. Note that augmented
-    fields are unsuitable for authorization decisions as they may be
-    retrieved at different times, thus being subject to races. Hence
+    fields are unsuitable for authorization decisions, as they may be
+    retrieved at different times, thus being subject to races. Hence,
     augmented fields should be used exclusively for informational
     purposes.
     </para>
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