From b8bde11658366290521e3d03316378b482600323 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de>
Date: Thu, 8 May 2014 01:28:45 +0200
Subject: doc: comma placement corrections and word order

Set commas where there should be some.
Some improvements to word order.
---
 man/sd_bus_message_append_string_memfd.xml | 18 +++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

(limited to 'man/sd_bus_message_append_string_memfd.xml')

diff --git a/man/sd_bus_message_append_string_memfd.xml b/man/sd_bus_message_append_string_memfd.xml
index bf185ef6d4..b44c482f28 100644
--- a/man/sd_bus_message_append_string_memfd.xml
+++ b/man/sd_bus_message_append_string_memfd.xml
@@ -80,27 +80,27 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
   <refsect1>
     <title>Description</title>
 
-    <para>Functions
+    <para>The functions
     <function>sd_bus_message_append_string_memfd</function> and
     <function>sd_bus_message_append_string_iovec</function> can be
     used to append a single string (item of type <literal>s</literal>)
     to message <parameter>m</parameter>.</para>
 
     <para>In case of
-    <function>sd_bus_message_append_string_memfd</function> the
+    <function>sd_bus_message_append_string_memfd</function>, the
     contents of <parameter>memfd</parameter> are the string. They must
     satisfy the same constraints as described for the
     <literal>s</literal> type in
     <citerefentry><refentrytitle>sd_bus_message_append_basic</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para>
 
     <para>In case of
-    <function>sd_bus_message_append_string_iovec</function> the
+    <function>sd_bus_message_append_string_iovec</function>, the
     payload of <parameter>iov</parameter> is the string. It must
     satisfy the same constraints as described for the
     <literal>s</literal> type in
     <citerefentry><refentrytitle>sd_bus_message_append_basic</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para>
 
-    <para>Pointer <parameter>iov</parameter> must point to
+    <para>The <parameter>iov</parameter> argument must point to
     <parameter>n</parameter> <structname>struct iovec</structname>
     structures. Each structure may have the
     <structname>iov_base</structname> field set, in which case the
@@ -110,10 +110,10 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
     memory pointed at by <parameter>iov</parameter> may be changed
     after this call.</para>
 
-    <para>Function
-    <function>sd_bus_message_append_string_space</function> appends
-    space for a string to message <parameter>m</parameter>. If behaves
-    similarly to <function>sd_bus_message_append_basic</function> with
+    <para>The
+    <function>sd_bus_message_append_string_space</function> function appends
+    space for a string to message <parameter>m</parameter>. It behaves
+    similar to <function>sd_bus_message_append_basic</function> with
     type <literal>s</literal>, but instead of copying a string into
     the message, it returns a pointer to the destination area to
     the caller in pointer <parameter>p</parameter>. Space for the string
@@ -133,7 +133,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
   <refsect1>
     <title>Notes</title>
 
-    <para>Functions described here are available as a shared library,
+    <para>The functions described here are available as a shared library,
     which can be compiled and linked to with the
     <constant>libsystemd</constant> <citerefentry><refentrytitle>pkg-config</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>
     file.</para>
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