From b8bde11658366290521e3d03316378b482600323 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de>
Date: Thu, 8 May 2014 01:28:45 +0200
Subject: doc: comma placement corrections and word order

Set commas where there should be some.
Some improvements to word order.
---
 man/sd_event_add_time.xml | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

(limited to 'man/sd_event_add_time.xml')

diff --git a/man/sd_event_add_time.xml b/man/sd_event_add_time.xml
index 9af8bb9c45..983e486562 100644
--- a/man/sd_event_add_time.xml
+++ b/man/sd_event_add_time.xml
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
     accuracy value in microseconds specifying a time the timer event
     may be delayed. Specify 0 for selecting the default accuracy
     (250ms). Specify 1 for most accurate timers. Consider specifying
-    60000000 or larger (1h) for long running events that may be
+    60000000 or larger (1h) for long-running events that may be
     delayed substantially. Picking higher accuracy values allows the
     system to coalesce timer events more aggressively, thus improving
     power efficiency. The <parameter>handler</parameter> shall
@@ -132,10 +132,10 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
     actually have been called at a slightly later time, subject to the
     specified accuracy value, the kernel timer slack (see
     <citerefentry><refentrytitle>prctl</refentrytitle><manvolnum>2</manvolnum></citerefentry>)
-    and additional scheduling latencies. By default the timer will
+    and additional scheduling latencies. By default, the timer will
     elapse once (SD_EVENT_ONESHOT), but this may be changed with
     <citerefentry><refentrytitle>sd_event_source_set_enabled</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>. If
-    the handler function returns a negative error code it will be
+    the handler function returns a negative error code, it will be
     disabled after the invocation, even if SD_EVENT_ON mode is set.
     </para>
 
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