From e9dd9f9547350c7dc0473583b5c2228dc8f0ab76 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: "Jason St. John" <jstjohn@purdue.edu>
Date: Thu, 27 Jun 2013 21:51:44 +0200
Subject: man: improve grammar and word formatting in numerous man pages

Use proper grammar, word usage, adjective hyphenation, commas,
capitalization, spelling, etc.

To improve readability, some run-on sentences or sentence fragments were
revised.

[zj: remove the space from 'file name', 'host name', and 'time zone'.]
---
 man/sd_id128_get_machine.xml | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

(limited to 'man/sd_id128_get_machine.xml')

diff --git a/man/sd_id128_get_machine.xml b/man/sd_id128_get_machine.xml
index 12887a240a..6bee7ad9c1 100644
--- a/man/sd_id128_get_machine.xml
+++ b/man/sd_id128_get_machine.xml
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
         <refnamediv>
                 <refname>sd_id128_get_machine</refname>
                 <refname>sd_id128_get_boot</refname>
-                <refpurpose>Retrieve 128 bit IDs</refpurpose>
+                <refpurpose>Retrieve 128-bit IDs</refpurpose>
         </refnamediv>
 
         <refsynopsisdiv>
@@ -92,10 +92,10 @@
                 <function>sd_id128_get_boot()</function> always returns
                 a UUID v4 compatible
                 ID. <function>sd_id128_get_machine()</function> will
-                also return a UUID v4 compatible ID on new
-                installations, but might not on older. It is possible
-                to convert the machine ID into an UUID v4 compatible
-                one. For more information see
+                also return a UUID v4-compatible ID on new
+                installations but might not on older. It is possible
+                to convert the machine ID into a UUID v4-compatible
+                one. For more information, see
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>machine-id</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para>
 
                 <para>For more information about the
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