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From: Jan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de>
Date: Thu, 12 Sep 2013 21:12:49 +0200
Subject: man: wording and grammar updates
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This is a recurring submission and includes corrections to various
issue spotted. I guess I can just skip over reporting ubiquitous
comma placement fixes…

Highligts in this particular commit:
- the "unsigned" type qualifier is completed to form a full type
  "unsigned int"
- alphabetic -> lexicographic (that way we automatically define how
  numbers get sorted)
---
 man/sd_session_is_active.xml | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

(limited to 'man/sd_session_is_active.xml')

diff --git a/man/sd_session_is_active.xml b/man/sd_session_is_active.xml
index 9362fbcc55..293ce71642 100644
--- a/man/sd_session_is_active.xml
+++ b/man/sd_session_is_active.xml
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@
                         <funcprototype>
                                 <funcdef>int <function>sd_session_get_vt</function></funcdef>
                                 <paramdef>const char* <parameter>session</parameter></paramdef>
-                                <paramdef>unsigned* <parameter>vt</parameter></paramdef>
+                                <paramdef>unsigned int* <parameter>vt</parameter></paramdef>
                         </funcprototype>
                 </funcsynopsis>
         </refsynopsisdiv>
@@ -217,7 +217,7 @@
 
                 <para>If the <varname>session</varname> parameter of
                 any of these functions is passed as
-                <constant>NULL</constant> the operation is executed
+                <constant>NULL</constant>, the operation is executed
                 for the session the calling process is a member of, if
                 there is any.</para>
         </refsect1>
@@ -225,7 +225,7 @@
         <refsect1>
                 <title>Return Value</title>
 
-                <para>If the test succeeds
+                <para>If the test succeeds,
                 <function>sd_session_is_active()</function> returns a
                 positive integer, if it fails 0.  On success
                 <function>sd_session_get_state()</function>,
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