From 79640424059328268b9fb6c5fa8eb777b27a177e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jan Engelhardt Date: Thu, 12 Sep 2013 21:12:49 +0200 Subject: man: wording and grammar updates MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit This is a recurring submission and includes corrections to various issue spotted. I guess I can just skip over reporting ubiquitous comma placement fixes… Highligts in this particular commit: - the "unsigned" type qualifier is completed to form a full type "unsigned int" - alphabetic -> lexicographic (that way we automatically define how numbers get sorted) --- man/systemctl.xml | 16 ++++++++-------- 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) (limited to 'man/systemctl.xml') diff --git a/man/systemctl.xml b/man/systemctl.xml index 1642a47273..b043581be0 100644 --- a/man/systemctl.xml +++ b/man/systemctl.xml @@ -566,7 +566,7 @@ kobject-uevent 1 systemd-udevd-kernel.socket systemd-udevd.service their configuration. Note that this will reload the service-specific configuration, not the unit configuration file of systemd. If you want systemd to reload the - configuration file of a unit use the + configuration file of a unit, use the daemon-reload command. In other words: for the example case of Apache, this will reload Apache's httpd.conf in the web server, not the @@ -692,12 +692,12 @@ kobject-uevent 1 systemd-udevd-kernel.socket systemd-udevd.service Show properties of one or more units, jobs, or the - manager itself. If no argument is specified properties of - the manager will be shown. If a unit name is specified + manager itself. If no argument is specified, properties of + the manager will be shown. If a unit name is specified, properties of the unit is shown, and if a job id is - specified properties of the job is shown. By default, empty + specified, properties of the job is shown. By default, empty properties are suppressed. Use to - show those too. To select specific properties to show use + show those too. To select specific properties to show, use . This command is intended to be used whenever computer-parsable output is required. Use status if you are looking for formatted @@ -1075,7 +1075,7 @@ kobject-uevent 1 systemd-udevd-kernel.socket systemd-udevd.service Reload systemd manager configuration. This will reload all unit files and recreate the entire dependency - tree. While the daemon is reloaded, all sockets systemd + tree. While the daemon is being reloaded, all sockets systemd listens on on behalf of user configuration will stay accessible. This command should not be confused with the load or @@ -1089,9 +1089,9 @@ kobject-uevent 1 systemd-udevd-kernel.socket systemd-udevd.service Reexecute the systemd manager. This will serialize the manager state, reexecute the process and deserialize the state again. This command is of little use except for - debugging and package upgrades. Sometimes it might be + debugging and package upgrades. Sometimes, it might be helpful as a heavy-weight daemon-reload. - While the daemon is reexecuted, all sockets systemd listening + While the daemon is being reexecuted, all sockets systemd listening on behalf of user configuration will stay accessible. -- cgit v1.2.3-54-g00ecf