From b8bde11658366290521e3d03316378b482600323 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de>
Date: Thu, 8 May 2014 01:28:45 +0200
Subject: doc: comma placement corrections and word order

Set commas where there should be some.
Some improvements to word order.
---
 man/systemctl.xml | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

(limited to 'man/systemctl.xml')

diff --git a/man/systemctl.xml b/man/systemctl.xml
index 28a7cca0ed..181de4fcd9 100644
--- a/man/systemctl.xml
+++ b/man/systemctl.xml
@@ -385,17 +385,17 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
           control processes. Note that there is only one control
           process per unit at a time, as only one state change is
           executed at a time. For services of type
-          <varname>Type=forking</varname> the initial process started
+          <varname>Type=forking</varname>, the initial process started
           by the manager for <varname>ExecStart=</varname> is a
           control process, while the process ultimately forked off by
           that one is then considered the main process of the unit (if
           it can be determined). This is different for service units
           of other types, where the process forked off by the manager
           for <varname>ExecStart=</varname> is always the main process
-          itself. A service unit consists of no or one main process,
-          no or one control process plus any number of additional
+          itself. A service unit consists of zero or one main process,
+          zero or one control process plus any number of additional
           processes. Not all unit types manage processes of these
-          types however. For example for mount units control processes
+          types however. For example, for mount units, control processes
           are defined (which are the invocations of
           <filename>/usr/bin/mount</filename> and
           <filename>/usr/bin/umount</filename>), but no main process
@@ -724,7 +724,7 @@ kobject-uevent 1 systemd-udevd-kernel.socket systemd-udevd.service
             <para>Show terse runtime status information about one or
             more units, followed by most recent log data from the
             journal. If no units are specified, show system status. If
-            combined with <option>--all</option> also show the status of
+            combined with <option>--all</option>, also show the status of
             all units (subject to limitations specified with
             <option>-t</option>). If a PID is passed, show information
             about the unit the process belongs to.</para>
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