From a8eaaee72a2f06e0fb64fb71de3b71ecba31dafb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de>
Date: Sun, 3 Aug 2014 07:11:37 +0200
Subject: doc: correct orthography, word forms and missing/extraneous words

---
 man/systemd-firstboot.xml | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

(limited to 'man/systemd-firstboot.xml')

diff --git a/man/systemd-firstboot.xml b/man/systemd-firstboot.xml
index b3bd59d41a..b269e48113 100644
--- a/man/systemd-firstboot.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-firstboot.xml
@@ -80,8 +80,8 @@
       <listitem><para>The root user's password</para></listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
 
-    <para>Each of the fields may either be queried interactively from
-    the users, set non-interactively on the tool's command line, or be
+    <para>Each of the fields may either be queried interactively by
+    users, set non-interactively on the tool's command line, or be
     copied from a host system that is used to set up the system
     image.</para>
 
@@ -166,9 +166,9 @@
         <citerefentry project='die-net'><refentrytitle>shadow</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>
         file. This setting exists in two forms:
         <option>--root-password=</option> accepts the password to set
-        directly on the command line,
+        directly on the command line, and
         <option>--root-password-file=</option> reads it from a file.
-        Note that it is not recommended specifying passwords on the
+        Note that it is not recommended to specify passwords on the
         command line, as other users might be able to see them simply
         by invoking
         <citerefentry project='die-net'><refentrytitle>ps</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para></listitem>
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