From 63ba209d8bc64137ff1585d5878328c93cb81b61 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de>
Date: Thu, 7 Nov 2013 01:17:48 +0100
Subject: man: wording and grammar updates

This is a recurring submission and includes corrections to various
issue spotted: comma setting, missing words/preposition choice.
---
 man/systemd-halt.service.xml | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

(limited to 'man/systemd-halt.service.xml')

diff --git a/man/systemd-halt.service.xml b/man/systemd-halt.service.xml
index 812281e60d..2fd7b8bf80 100644
--- a/man/systemd-halt.service.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-halt.service.xml
@@ -74,11 +74,11 @@
                 <filename>kexec.target</filename> to execute the
                 respective actions.</para>
 
-                <para>When these services are run they ensure that PID
+                <para>When these services are run, they ensure that PID
                 1 is replaced by the
                 <filename>/usr/lib/systemd/systemd-shutdown</filename>
                 tool which is then responsible for the actual
-                shutdown. Before shutting down this binary will try to
+                shutdown. Before shutting down, this binary will try to
                 unmount all remaining file systems, disable all
                 remaining swap devices, detach all remaining storage
                 devices and kill all remaining processes.</para>
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