From 19aadacf92ad86967ffb678e37b2ff9e83cb9480 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de>
Date: Tue, 22 Oct 2013 01:50:48 +0200
Subject: man: wording and grammar updates

This is a recurring submission and includes corrections to various
issue spotted.
---
 man/systemd-socket-proxyd.xml | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

(limited to 'man/systemd-socket-proxyd.xml')

diff --git a/man/systemd-socket-proxyd.xml b/man/systemd-socket-proxyd.xml
index 87122f5381..9f2389a04c 100644
--- a/man/systemd-socket-proxyd.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-socket-proxyd.xml
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@
                 <cmdsynopsis>
                         <command>systemd-socket-proxyd</command>
                         <arg choice="opt" rep="repeat">OPTIONS</arg>
-                        <arg choice="plain"><replaceable>HOSTNAME-OR-IP</replaceable></arg>
+                        <arg choice="plain"><replaceable>HOSTNAME-OR-IPADDR</replaceable></arg>
                         <arg choice="plain"><replaceable>PORT-OR-SERVICE</replaceable></arg>
                 </cmdsynopsis>
                 <cmdsynopsis>
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@
                 for each client, and then bidirectionally forwards
                 data between the two.</para>
                 <para>This utility's behavior is similar to
-                <citerefentry><refentrytitle>socat</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum> </citerefentry>.
+                <citerefentry><refentrytitle>socat</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>.
                 The main differences for <command>systemd-socket-proxyd</command>
                 are support for socket activation with
                 <literal>Accept=false</literal> and an event-driven
@@ -98,9 +98,9 @@
                                 <listitem>
                                         <para>Skips verification of
                                         the expected PID and file
-                                        descriptor numbers. Use if
+                                        descriptor numbers. Use this if
                                         invoked indirectly, for
-                                        example with a shell script
+                                        example, with a shell script
                                         rather than with
                                         <option>ExecStart=/usr/lib/systemd/systemd-socket-proxyd</option>
                                         </para>
@@ -110,7 +110,7 @@
         </refsect1>
         <refsect1>
                 <title>Exit status</title>
-                <para>On success 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
+                <para>On success, 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
                 code otherwise.</para>
         </refsect1>
         <refsect1>
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