From e9dd9f9547350c7dc0473583b5c2228dc8f0ab76 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: "Jason St. John" <jstjohn@purdue.edu>
Date: Thu, 27 Jun 2013 21:51:44 +0200
Subject: man: improve grammar and word formatting in numerous man pages

Use proper grammar, word usage, adjective hyphenation, commas,
capitalization, spelling, etc.

To improve readability, some run-on sentences or sentence fragments were
revised.

[zj: remove the space from 'file name', 'host name', and 'time zone'.]
---
 man/systemd.socket.xml | 16 ++++++++--------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

(limited to 'man/systemd.socket.xml')

diff --git a/man/systemd.socket.xml b/man/systemd.socket.xml
index 0d5652b834..0ff3ca22ac 100644
--- a/man/systemd.socket.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.socket.xml
@@ -387,8 +387,8 @@
                                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>close</refentrytitle><manvolnum>2</manvolnum></citerefentry>
                                 on the received socket before
                                 exiting. However, it must not unlink
-                                the socket from a filesystem. It
-                                should note invoke
+                                the socket from a file system. It
+                                should not invoke
                                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>shutdown</refentrytitle><manvolnum>2</manvolnum></citerefentry>
                                 on sockets it got with
                                 <varname>Accept=false</varname>, but
@@ -412,7 +412,7 @@
                                 are coming in, they will be refused
                                 until at least one existing connection
                                 is terminated. This setting has no
-                                effect for sockets configured with
+                                effect on sockets configured with
                                 <option>Accept=false</option> or datagram
                                 sockets. Defaults to
                                 64.</para></listitem>
@@ -516,7 +516,7 @@
                                 respectively, i.e. the security label
                                 of the FIFO, or the security label for
                                 the incoming or outgoing connections
-                                of the socket, respectively.  See
+                                of the socket, respectively. See
                                 <ulink
                                 url="https://www.kernel.org/doc/Documentation/security/Smack.txt">Smack.txt</ulink>
                                 for details.</para></listitem>
@@ -527,7 +527,7 @@
                                 <listitem><para>Takes an integer
                                 value. Controls the pipe buffer size
                                 of FIFOs configured in this socket
-                                unit.  See
+                                unit. See
                                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>fcntl</refentrytitle><manvolnum>2</manvolnum></citerefentry>
                                 for details.</para></listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
@@ -598,7 +598,7 @@
                                 socket option, which allows <constant>AF_UNIX</constant>
                                 sockets to receive the security
                                 context of the sending process in an
-                                ancillary message.  Defaults to
+                                ancillary message. Defaults to
                                 <option>false</option>.</para></listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
 
@@ -622,7 +622,7 @@
                                 before or after the listening
                                 sockets/FIFOs are created and
                                 bound, respectively. The first token of the command
-                                line must be an absolute file name,
+                                line must be an absolute filename,
                                 then followed by arguments for the
                                 process. Multiple command lines may be
                                 specified following the same scheme as
@@ -701,7 +701,7 @@
                   </para>
 
                   <para>
-                          For more extensive descriptions see the "Systemd for Developers" series:
+                          For more extensive descriptions see the "systemd for Developers" series:
                           <ulink url="http://0pointer.de/blog/projects/socket-activation.html">Socket Activation</ulink>,
                           <ulink url="http://0pointer.de/blog/projects/socket-activation2.html">Socket Activation, part II</ulink>,
                           <ulink url="http://0pointer.de/blog/projects/inetd.html">Converting inetd Services</ulink>,
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