From 45df8656ebb1b0559a75993d1508fc61c2d39829 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jan Engelhardt Date: Sat, 28 Jun 2014 00:49:12 +0200 Subject: doc: typographical improvements and choice of words --- man/sysctl.d.xml | 4 ++-- man/systemd.network.xml | 4 ++-- man/tmpfiles.d.xml | 2 +- 3 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) (limited to 'man') diff --git a/man/sysctl.d.xml b/man/sysctl.d.xml index ed9e997f8a..dd73f92236 100644 --- a/man/sysctl.d.xml +++ b/man/sysctl.d.xml @@ -154,7 +154,7 @@ - Disable packet filter on the bridge (method one) + Disable packet filter on bridged packets (method one) /etc/udev/rules.d/99-bridge.conf: @@ -171,7 +171,7 @@ net.bridge.bridge-nf-call-arptables = 0 - Disable packet filter on the bridge (method two) + Disable packet filter on bridged packets (method two) /etc/modules-load.d/bridge.conf: diff --git a/man/systemd.network.xml b/man/systemd.network.xml index 21f6d50cc7..5bff4d9d87 100644 --- a/man/systemd.network.xml +++ b/man/systemd.network.xml @@ -237,14 +237,14 @@ interfaces and all known network configuration files to - avoid IP range + avoid address range conflicts. The default system-wide pool consists of 192.168.0.0/16, 172.16.0.0/12 and 10.0.0.0/8 for IPv4, - and [fc00::] for + and fc00::/7 for IPv6. This functionality is useful to manage a diff --git a/man/tmpfiles.d.xml b/man/tmpfiles.d.xml index 65716c305d..81457c45e0 100644 --- a/man/tmpfiles.d.xml +++ b/man/tmpfiles.d.xml @@ -433,7 +433,7 @@ r! /tmp/.X[0-9]*-lock be removed from the new access mode too, and if all write bits are removed, they will be removed from the new access mode too. In - addition, the sticky/suid/gid bit is removed unless + addition, the sticky/SUID/SGID bit is removed unless applied to a directory. This functionality is particularly useful in conjunction with Z. -- cgit v1.2.3-54-g00ecf