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author | Jason St. John <jstjohn@purdue.edu> | 2012-07-06 16:03:09 -0400 |
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committer | Tom Gundersen <teg@jklm.no> | 2012-07-12 02:11:59 +0200 |
commit | c2f7b97924e2b5341cea667fbd1a2802e9cb8cd5 (patch) | |
tree | 5a7ee1b909f1063859333faeb9d40354ad9c2547 /network | |
parent | b2c9096cf0be6d655550ae880da8735ef048fc10 (diff) |
Correct spelling and grammar throughout
This patch addresses the issues with my previous patch submission here:
https://mailman.archlinux.org/pipermail/arch-projects/2012-June/002990.html
The notable changes between this patch and the previous one are below:
-- this patch does not rename set_timezone()
-- 'filesystems' and 'bash' are left as-is
-- everything is in one patch, not two
-- the 'makedepends' change is no longer relevant because the duplication
of it was already removed in a later commit
Regarding the capitalization of "Btrfs", it seems that upstream prefers
"Btrfs".[1][2]
Regarding 'https://' vs. 'http://', I left this change in the patch
because stating 'https://www.archlinux.org' in the start-up messages
doesn't force anyone to use HTTPS over HTTP. It simply shows that HTTPS
is available for use. If someone really doesn't want to use HTTPS, they
don't have to. Finally, Dan McGee stated that HTTPS will be used all the
time soon.[3]
[1] https://oss.oracle.com/projects/btrfs/
[2] https://btrfs.wiki.kernel.org/index.php/Main_Page
[3] https://bugs.archlinux.org/task/30486#comment96222
Signed-off-by: Jason St. John <jstjohn@purdue.edu>
Diffstat (limited to 'network')
-rwxr-xr-x | network | 10 |
1 files changed, 5 insertions, 5 deletions
@@ -235,15 +235,15 @@ case "$1" in # deprecation check need_legacy && deprecated if ! ck_daemon network; then - echo "Network is already running. Try 'network restart'" + echo "Network is already running. Try 'network restart'" exit fi - stat_busy "Starting Network" + stat_busy "Starting network" error=0 if need_legacy; then # bring up bridge interfaces bridge_up - # bring up ethernet interfaces + # bring up Ethernet interfaces for ifline in ${INTERFACES[@]}; do if [[ $ifline = ${ifline#!} ]]; then ifup $ifline || error=1 @@ -271,11 +271,11 @@ case "$1" in # deprecation check need_legacy && deprecated if [[ $NETWORK_PERSIST =~ yes|YES && $RUNLEVEL == [06] ]]; then - status "Skipping Network Shutdown" true + status "Skipping network shutdown" true exit 0 fi - stat_busy "Stopping Network" + stat_busy "Stopping network" rm_daemon network error=0 if need_legacy; then |