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authorZbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl>2012-07-28 23:10:15 +0200
committerZbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl>2012-07-28 23:10:15 +0200
commitb8e8f0cba4c08a07612b8d24281f57e33419708c (patch)
treee6b3d6d0c5639c88c4938c4cb3eea2a4b2a98987
parentf8e9f2cc4bbf6d1ee8ec6d5618f95be03530b95a (diff)
man: grammar fixes for systemd-udev(8)
-rw-r--r--man/systemd-udevd.xml29
1 files changed, 17 insertions, 12 deletions
diff --git a/man/systemd-udevd.xml b/man/systemd-udevd.xml
index 0045f235e6..ca5ec50357 100644
--- a/man/systemd-udevd.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-udevd.xml
@@ -50,9 +50,10 @@
</refsynopsisdiv>
<refsect1><title>Description</title>
- <para>systemd-udevd listens to kernel uevents. For every event, systemd-udevd executes matching
- instructions specified in udev rules. See <citerefentry>
- <refentrytitle>udev</refentrytitle><manvolnum>7</manvolnum>
+ <para><command>systemd-udevd</command> listens to kernel uevents.
+ For every event, systemd-udevd executes matching instructions
+ specified in udev rules. See <citerefentry>
+ <refentrytitle>udev</refentrytitle><manvolnum>7</manvolnum>
</citerefentry>.</para>
<para>The behavior of the running daemon can be changed with
<command>udevadm control</command>.</para>
@@ -75,15 +76,17 @@
<varlistentry>
<term><option>--children-max=</option></term>
<listitem>
- <para>Limit the number of parallel executed events.</para>
+ <para>Limit the number of events executed in parallel.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
<varlistentry>
<term><option>--exec-delay=</option></term>
<listitem>
- <para>Number of seconds to delay the execution of RUN instructions.
- This might be useful when debugging system crashes during coldplug
- cause by loading non-working kernel modules.</para>
+
+ <para>Delay the execution of RUN intruction by the given
+ number of seconds. This option might be useful when
+ debugging system crashes during coldplug caused by loading
+ non-working kernel modules.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
<varlistentry>
@@ -125,7 +128,8 @@
<refsect1><title>Kernel command line</title>
<variablelist>
- <para>The parameters starting with "rd.", will be read when udev is used in an initrd.</para>
+ <para>Parameters starting with "rd." will be read when
+ <command>systemd-udevd</command> is used in an initrd.</para>
<varlistentry>
<term><varname>udev.log-priority=</varname></term>
<term><varname>rd.udev.log-priority=</varname></term>
@@ -137,16 +141,17 @@
<term><varname>udev.children-max=</varname></term>
<term><varname>rd.udev.children-max=</varname></term>
<listitem>
- <para>Limit the number of parallel executed events.</para>
+ <para>Limit the number of events executed in parallel.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
<varlistentry>
<term><varname>udev.exec-delay=</varname></term>
<term><varname>rd.udev.exec-delay=</varname></term>
<listitem>
- <para>Number of seconds to delay the execution of RUN instructions.
- This might be useful when debugging system crashes during coldplug
- cause by loading non-working kernel modules.</para>
+ <para>Delay the execution of RUN intruction by the given
+ number of seconds. This option might be useful when
+ debugging system crashes during coldplug caused by loading
+ non-working kernel modules.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
</variablelist>