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| author | Jason St. John <jstjohn@purdue.edu> | 2013-06-27 21:51:44 +0200 |
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| committer | Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl> | 2013-07-02 23:06:22 -0400 |
| commit | e9dd9f9547350c7dc0473583b5c2228dc8f0ab76 (patch) | |
| tree | 8c40d1a1e527a09974839ac44a3b7b3d19232758 /man/sd_id128_get_machine.xml | |
| parent | 6824690f140f45064157d220a24b9afbeb1d093f (diff) | |
man: improve grammar and word formatting in numerous man pages
Use proper grammar, word usage, adjective hyphenation, commas,
capitalization, spelling, etc.
To improve readability, some run-on sentences or sentence fragments were
revised.
[zj: remove the space from 'file name', 'host name', and 'time zone'.]
Diffstat (limited to 'man/sd_id128_get_machine.xml')
| -rw-r--r-- | man/sd_id128_get_machine.xml | 10 |
1 files changed, 5 insertions, 5 deletions
diff --git a/man/sd_id128_get_machine.xml b/man/sd_id128_get_machine.xml index 12887a240a..6bee7ad9c1 100644 --- a/man/sd_id128_get_machine.xml +++ b/man/sd_id128_get_machine.xml @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ <refnamediv> <refname>sd_id128_get_machine</refname> <refname>sd_id128_get_boot</refname> - <refpurpose>Retrieve 128 bit IDs</refpurpose> + <refpurpose>Retrieve 128-bit IDs</refpurpose> </refnamediv> <refsynopsisdiv> @@ -92,10 +92,10 @@ <function>sd_id128_get_boot()</function> always returns a UUID v4 compatible ID. <function>sd_id128_get_machine()</function> will - also return a UUID v4 compatible ID on new - installations, but might not on older. It is possible - to convert the machine ID into an UUID v4 compatible - one. For more information see + also return a UUID v4-compatible ID on new + installations but might not on older. It is possible + to convert the machine ID into a UUID v4-compatible + one. For more information, see <citerefentry><refentrytitle>machine-id</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para> <para>For more information about the |