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author | Jan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de> | 2014-08-03 07:11:37 +0200 |
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committer | Jan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de> | 2015-11-06 13:45:21 +0100 |
commit | a8eaaee72a2f06e0fb64fb71de3b71ecba31dafb (patch) | |
tree | 8495d6e11cf1eefc1a9ea66290430e158e2e71cf /man/systemd-firstboot.xml | |
parent | b938cb902c3b5bca807a94b277672c64d6767886 (diff) |
doc: correct orthography, word forms and missing/extraneous words
Diffstat (limited to 'man/systemd-firstboot.xml')
-rw-r--r-- | man/systemd-firstboot.xml | 8 |
1 files changed, 4 insertions, 4 deletions
diff --git a/man/systemd-firstboot.xml b/man/systemd-firstboot.xml index b3bd59d41a..b269e48113 100644 --- a/man/systemd-firstboot.xml +++ b/man/systemd-firstboot.xml @@ -80,8 +80,8 @@ <listitem><para>The root user's password</para></listitem> </itemizedlist> - <para>Each of the fields may either be queried interactively from - the users, set non-interactively on the tool's command line, or be + <para>Each of the fields may either be queried interactively by + users, set non-interactively on the tool's command line, or be copied from a host system that is used to set up the system image.</para> @@ -166,9 +166,9 @@ <citerefentry project='die-net'><refentrytitle>shadow</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry> file. This setting exists in two forms: <option>--root-password=</option> accepts the password to set - directly on the command line, + directly on the command line, and <option>--root-password-file=</option> reads it from a file. - Note that it is not recommended specifying passwords on the + Note that it is not recommended to specify passwords on the command line, as other users might be able to see them simply by invoking <citerefentry project='die-net'><refentrytitle>ps</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para></listitem> |